|Reviews for Jailbait|
| Cotton Strings chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I'm sorry but this made absolutely no sense to me. Maybe you should consider reworking it. All of it.
| ManaHara chapter 10 . 5/3/2011
God! I luv this story! Don't listen to them, Your a great author!:)
| Cam chapter 6 . 6/22/2010
Stop starting all of your paragraphs with songs, and condense the chapters into one or two. Right now the songs are longer than the writing.