Reviews for Apple Pie
luluhrh chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
cheesy? yass! stupid? nope, adorable! sudden? i dunno, why ask me, ask somebody who knows you!

anyway, this was freaking CUUUUUUUUTE! ah, EdWin. . . OTP! OTP! #OTP!
PotatoLizard chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
As soon as you said "But that's just how I roll" I cracked up laughing so thank you.
I remember reading this a while back, as well as 'The Bet' and I loved both of them, but I forgot to favourite them, so when I remembered them, I couldn't find them. After a long and gruelling search, I found these beautiful fics again, so I thank you for not deleting them and for creating them, O great and mighty InevitableConfusion!
Thanks for this fic as well, by the way. What the hell, I'm gonna throw in a thanks for your existence in too! Free!
gox921 chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Do this more often
Athenafrodite chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
AWE-SOME-NESS. I LOVED it, seriously

i hope you keep writing this kind of things, really, this one was so good!

lots of kisses, A.
TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
this. is. so. amazing! please write a sequel
Teagsiebabe85 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Simple and beautiful, random and fluffy. I loved it :)
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Aww, so freaking cute. That was so cute it gave me a headache lol. Awesome job once again! I know this is one of your earlier stories, but it's still awesome!
Sora919 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Cheesy? Naw, it was sweet. Stupid? Awesomely written. Sudden? Not really. Either way I loved the story.
The Curse of Forever chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I loved it, I don't think Ed was OOC really, I imagine he would like teasing Winry. Really enjoyed the story ;)
Xenia van Hausen chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Haha. I loved the end.


"'Oi, you realize you still have to get me a birthday present.'



That cracked me up. I loved everything-how you explained the setting, the thoughts, everything. Great job! I hope to see more of these fics come up!
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
This is quite cute.
Aquamom207 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Do you ever have that thing where you're looking for a specific fic to read - you're in the mood for a specific style of writing and you want the story to go in a certain direction but you're not sure what direction that is? And you start reading fics and nothing is sating this absolute NEED you have for some ridiculous nonsense and you start to think you might be losing your mind and that the knocking at the door you hear must be those guys in the white jackets (GAWD they never give up) and you're just about to give up all hope and go throw yourself over the edge of a step-stool when SUDDENLY THERE IT IS.

Yeah, I'm having that right now. And it tastes like victory.

Which, by the way, tastes a lot like chicken.

I enjoyed this fic in a very severe way. In a way that is probably considered unhealthy in many states. So thanks :)
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
you know, winry wasn't the only one blushing here...

while i was reading that intimate moment there between the two at the near end of the story, i can't help but feel some warmth crawling onto my cheeks until to my ears.

but i really liked your story... way to go with your seduction ed! XD
oakleaf chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Wonderful, cute and sudden.

But still awesome all the same. The two of them are just so cute together!

I loved it!
BakaMick chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I'm a complete sucker for romance manga/anime sometimes and EdWin is one of my faves, with that in mind, loved the story, it also helped that I was giggling like a mental patient at Winry's inner monologe, but meh, I love comedy as much as romance XP

(BTW love the motto in your profile, it's just...perfect lol)
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