Reviews for His girl
team cullen chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
So good. They really are made for eachother. Though im sad this fic is finished
GGG888 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Nice chapter
cherryrose89 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
awesome outtake! i hope you right a sequel :D
Twilight Eve chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Well this was FUN! AH, I love it, you should seriously do more of these 'outtakes' ... so good!
fatemeh3 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
hot hot HOT!this is by FAR my favorite chapter so far!3:)
DesignatedReader chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Wow! That was super hot!
Blake chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
please keep going 333
twifanatheart27 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
So, I opted to take the M rated version. I didn't notice until i was completely enthralled by the story that you haven't updated since June. Is there going to be a new chapter soon? I really love this and would like to see it finished. :)
haha! oh they are sure to make up for it ;) i wonder how long the "make-up" will take! haha if i was Bella, i'd drag it on for ...well, a very long time :D haha! Edward is my favourite character!3
angelbaby468 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010

omg i luvvv this story to deathh!

and i cant wait until the next chapter!

i made my friend read it and she luvs it as well.

i cant wait until u update

i want to know what happens next!

and yes i would luv me some naked edward



i hope u udpate soon!

keep up the great work!

luvlins chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
a naked one? really? does he do that to you too?
RandiA.K.AMiranda chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
lolz its me again and omg now i really cant wait for the next chapter
torrie ann chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
omg keep going i want to know wat rose and alice does omg and emmett and jasper carlisle and esme
koolgal9520 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
plz make the next fast!...IM IN LOVE WITH THESE!...BUT this is a new story continuing "cullen's girl" right?
koolgal9520 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
please make the next fast! fast fast fast...I LOVE YOUR SERIES!...IM IN LOVE WITH THEM!
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