Reviews for Perfectly Dysfunctional
SkeletonCops chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
SkeletonCops chapter 11 . 9/21/2013
YESSS! FINALLY THE KISS! Sucky story- ('Say When'-this one) but great ending and humor
SkeletonCops chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
i think i read around three fanfics in which six's name is adam,and i think it siuts him. holiday's real name is rebecca btw.
Shiverpool chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
Shyma. You. Are. My. Favorite. Author. Ever. This chapter made me cry nonstop for 15 minutes. SO SWEET!

My life song is "Hey Juliet."
CG07 chapter 16 . 4/5/2013
I REALLY like this chapter. I love it when Holiday and Six end up as Rex's parents. You should do a chapter when Cesar shows up! Well I know it's been awhile since you've updated, but you never know when inspiration strikes next!

Great job on this! I've enjoyed all of your chapters!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
dear shyma, personally I think Six can't get perverted ENOUGH!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
honestly...I don't see how SIX could look bad in NOTHING BUT SWEATS ;D
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17/2012
awesome. I have wanted to write a review for the last couple of chapters but I was too busy reading the next one...keep it up!
sunshine and tears chapter 16 . 5/28/2012
I'm crying! Tears of joy, I'm crying a river. In the past 4 hours of reading I finally have finished this and I'm crying, I to the end of time LOVE this, I bow down to you, this is beyond amazing. Not even all the good words in the English dictionary can explain how much in love I am with your writing. It's just brilliant, each and every chapter. So amazingly formed and put together, just arrghh BRILLIANTLY BEAUTIFUL! Thank you! :D

-Sunshine and tears.
Cherries and Bearbees chapter 16 . 12/12/2011
This is so adorable as story. I was/am smiling, giggling and laughing while reading it and I can't help but to hope for another chapter soon~
kblvs2read chapter 16 . 7/4/2011
Gotta say that I'm pretty disappointed in myself for not finding this fic until now! I read all 16 chapters in one sitting, and I. Love. It. :D Holix is one of the best shippings ever, and it's so wonderful that you cover so many genres :)

Quick comment about this current chapter: Finally! A true family :D


P.S. You officially made my WEEK when you mentioned POTF in the last chapter. I'm the only person in my group who knows that wonderful band (Carnival of Rust is amazing~! I love Miss Impossible too), and it can be heartbreakingly lonely at times :/
ShelbyBelby14 chapter 16 . 6/12/2011
This was adorable. I love it!
The Beast 92 chapter 16 . 5/14/2011
mate this is great keep going with it
Nat chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Omg ive read this whole fic and im listening to Jealous Guy by John Lennon and it seems to fit this fic so well!
Nat chapter 5 . 2/27/2011
That song sounds like a good choice. Could you maybe put on of my pesonal fav holix songs in one of your fics? Just a suggestion.

1. Need you now by Lady Antebellum (it won like 3 grammys)

2. I don't wanna miss a thing by aerosmith

There u go! Ur story rocks!
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