|Reviews for Going So Soon?|
| HowlFrenchFries689 chapter 1 . 8/10
Love this story! Great one shot.
| danielpaul chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Excellent one shot...I like the depiction of Naruto and Hinata even from a while back when the story was written. I think the kindness and concern they show for each other is right in character for them. Funny ending too.
| Firework's Feelings chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
That was incredible. really enjoed this to the fullest. I'll be satisfied if you choose not to finish this.
| Mangajuicexd chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
It was very mushy
| Annabanana1127 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Nice. ] I liked the flirtatious banter. Well done. :]
| MsStampede chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
super cute. you did a great job with keeping naruto the way he should be silly and adorable. great job
| The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
This is great please continue.
| Lynns chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
This was pretty good. I enjoyed it
| SasuSakuisforalways chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Be careful about spelling errors though; there are quite a few in there. Also, DO NOT use texting abreviations like '2' and '4rth'. In the case of 2, you need to use the actual word, and any number under 100 should be spelled out.
The last few lines were a little confusing because I could not figure out who was talking.
You do write welll; therefore, I'd like you to do away with the spelling errors and the 'text' stuff. Anyone else who read this isn't going to be able to see you're a good writer if you've got obvious errors.
My highest praise and warnings to you.
~SasuSaku NaruHina chick
| Jess chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I loved the ending, but the whole thing was so cute. 5/5
| Daydreamer-74423 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010