Reviews for The Wrong Guy to Mug
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
This is the reason I love fanfiction. I started reading fanfics for good stories like this one. Thank you :)
deletedddddddddddddddddddddddd chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
I know I'm only reading this now, but this is a great story and I love it :)
2509su chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
That was perfect and ending was.. i dont know, netter than perfect? Yeah something like that.
Vitaliciouscreations chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Sweetness. Awesome
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Ha that was amazing :)
random-k chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Defiantly the wrong guy
DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
HAHAHAHA Okay, Sky, try to get yourself back together girl, come on! No laughing out loud, remember, the 'rents don't know you're up...

Ahem, forgive my musing to myself.


You got that right, Perce...

Go Nico!
Anon chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Haha good plot and great writing! I love it!
LittlePlagueSpirit chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Why yes, some people are just clearly insane. Sure, the Mist doesn't make them smarter, but seriously: Nico is a young boy who already looks like a walking dead, who was not acting scared at all and who could free himself like that, and those guys still thought that they could take him on? That's like looking at a haunted house, seeing the bloody axe standing against the door and still think: "hey, this place looks nice, let's ask for directions here." So yes Nico, show them what you got (and I got a good laugh at Nico's comments and his thought about Percy rubbing off on him. That boy is such a good influence on kids :D).

And I have no problem with your paragraphs. They look fine to me, not too long or with too much information crammed in one spot: just the right size. Nice one-shot full of Nico's mad skills in the real world and some boys making the worst mistake in their lives. A pleasure to read!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Loved it, even though I was expecting it to be more humorous and less angsty.

Tabbyprincess chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Only critique: You need more paragraphs. Split up the huge one, please!

Aside from that, fantastic!
SylarTookMyPower chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
This story is fantastic! I especially love Percy's reaction at the end.
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Wow, I almost feel bad for those teens. Great story and characterization! Just the last paragraph, you know, I'm sure you've heard it already...
AM83220 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Another enjoyable story, but marred by your inability to properly separate it into paragraphs. That and the small print made it difficult for me to read it.
cindella204 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Long paragraphs make me sad, but the characterization was PERFECT as usual.

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