I like it! Wish there was more. Thanks for writing.

Jazzola :)

This is really good! You should continue it!

Great beginning to this story! Aside from a few grammatical errors, I rather enjoy your style of writing. You've got the right amount of attention to details and the characters are in character (_!). I like this idea of yours. It's quite original and sounds like a plot that would actually come up in the show. There should be more like that out there. _

Please continue!