|Reviews for Will of Fire|
| FadedPolaris chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
I just adore your writing. I have read each of your stories several times.
I love how chaotic and stressful this has started out. It has amazing potential. I can't wait until the next updated!
| kinawa nee-chan chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
wow! this was great! both ch 1 and 2 are amazing! i like the touches on the different connections and relationships between the shinobi of konoha... nice! V_
| Black Mirror chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Intriguing start, and I am glad they escaped. Wonder where Kakashi is while all this is taking place ...
| Hitomi Star chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
This is SOOOOOO sad! I want to just skip everything and get on with the Kakashi and Sakura pairing. BUT I know that that would just ruin the nice pace in the story that you set so I'll have to take deep breaths and calm my heart down :)
| lyl wind chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Another amazing story that pulls at the heart strings. I've never liked Danzou and this just really makes me want to see him go down. Please update soon!
| hisako-sempai too lazy to log chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
oh wow, this is amazing! seriously though, good plot, the characters are ic, and it's well written grammatically and otherwise... nice job so far, keep it up!
| ZexyTrash chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
As always your writing technique and style have me hooked!
I'm eager to watch this fic develop and to read more! :D
| NarutoTard1 chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Awesome second chapter :D i love your stories you inspired me to make Fanfics myself thank you :D
| Eldr-Fire chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Wow! Intense chapter!
I didn't like it as much as the first because the interrogation stuff really made me nervous, but when Sakura and Shizune broke out, it was so cool! (I guess because I can handle intense as the action but not as the anticipation of torture...!) (Thankfully there was no torture, though. Thank you!)
Man, that Hyuuga stuff was intense too. I wonder what Neji will do. The seed for reform has been planted- will he come around to Hinata's truth or stubbornly cling to the clan? Now that he is finally in their favor. Tough position. We know the right choice but still tough. Quite an intense set-up. Outcome unknown!
And still no sign of Kakashi. Interesting! The 'many elite ninja are out on missions' could suggest that he's not in the village... We'll see, I suppose!
Nice prompt update, too! Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Emziiee-xxx chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Oh noes *Cries* Well at least Sasuke is dead. YAY! I hope they find everyone...and that no-one else is dead. I'll cry if they are...
| midnight000shadow chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
woooooooooow sooo goood! XD this is so intense and so interesting! i hope u update soon becuz im looking forward to seeing how things go from here!
| Silberias chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Holy mother of god this is an amazing chapter. Completely sad-the Hyuuga sisters, Ino, Tsunade-but so mindblowingly awesome that the sadness only makes it more awesome! Gaaaah! What's your updating schedule for this?
| Skyllar Eve chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
I'm very excited for this story.
Kakashi and Sakura make a nice couple
and I'm looking forward to how you're
going to make their relationship :)
| Blaster chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Great story, please update soon, will naruto and sakura meet up?
| Third Time Charm chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
I've always loved reading your stories-the writing is so intricate. Between the layered emotions and ambitions in the characters and the plots, they've always been a joy to follow.
Even within two chapters, "Will of Fire" is captivating. I can't wait to see where you choose to go with this!