Reviews for Will of Fire
Autumn's Wind chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
nice chapter :D I can't wait for the next update...
Renor Faer chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
I'm so happy that you're writing this! Great chapter, I think you have a really excellent grasp on the raw emotions that they would be feeling in this situation.
k8ew8e chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
This story is soooo well done! It is the best naruto fanfic I have ever read! Thank you!
k8ew8e chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Oh my god! I cried!
Mellifluence chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
A superb beginning. You captured the chaos and tragedy of a military coup with sensitivity and remarkable vividness.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

(Neji - what ARE you doing?)
FadedPolaris chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
I just adore your writing. I have read each of your stories several times.

I love how chaotic and stressful this has started out. It has amazing potential~. I can't wait until the next updated!
kinawa nee-chan chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
wow! this was great! both ch 1 and 2 are amazing! i like the touches on the different connections and relationships between the shinobi of konoha... nice! V_
Black Mirror chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Intriguing start, and I am glad they escaped. Wonder where Kakashi is while all this is taking place ...
Hitomi Star chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
This is SOOOOOO sad! I want to just skip everything and get on with the Kakashi and Sakura pairing. BUT I know that that would just ruin the nice pace in the story that you set so I'll have to take deep breaths and calm my heart down :)
Holly Sage chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Another amazing story that pulls at the heart strings. I've never liked Danzou and this just really makes me want to see him go down. Please update soon!
hisako-sempai too lazy to log chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
oh wow, this is amazing! seriously though, good plot, the characters are ic, and it's well written grammatically and otherwise... nice job so far, keep it up!
ZexyTrash chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
As always your writing technique and style have me hooked!

I'm eager to watch this fic develop and to read more! :D
NarutoTard1 chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Awesome second chapter :D i love your stories you inspired me to make Fanfics myself thank you :D
Eldr-Fire chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Wow! Intense chapter!

I didn't like it as much as the first because the interrogation stuff really made me nervous, but when Sakura and Shizune broke out, it was so cool! (I guess because I can handle intense as the action but not as the anticipation of torture...!) (Thankfully there was no torture, though. Thank you!)

Man, that Hyuuga stuff was intense too. I wonder what Neji will do. The seed for reform has been planted- will he come around to Hinata's truth or stubbornly cling to the clan? Now that he is finally in their favor. Tough position. We know the right choice but still tough. Quite an intense set-up. Outcome unknown!

And still no sign of Kakashi. Interesting! The 'many elite ninja are out on missions' could suggest that he's not in the village... We'll see, I suppose!

Nice prompt update, too! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Eldr
Emziiee-xxx chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Oh noes *Cries* Well at least Sasuke is dead. YAY! I hope they find everyone...and that no-one else is dead. I'll cry if they are...

Update soon

Emily
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