|Reviews for Tenten Has The Lips of an Angel|
| shoshoryuu07 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
You should check your spelling. ;;) And I was a little off the edge, it's like you never ended the story. What happened next after the kiss? Did Tenten break the marriage with Kiba and Neji break the marriage with Sakura? Did they live happily ever after? Did Hiashi actually put Neji into a test? You should always end your stories, not with hanging cliffies. :) Those are just tips, you really don't have to follow it. Don't take this the wrong way. :D I liked your story. Improve, okay? ;;)
| Mysterious Bluerose chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Awh, this was really cute! I love this song and I totally hate Sakura and Kiba, so this story was perfect! XD I'm really suprised that this is your first fanfiction, mine was terrible. You did have some grammar and spelling mistakes, but they really weren't that noticeable. I look forward to your next story!