Reviews for Just This Once
pipelynn chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Ahhh, i remember those days like they were yesterday! love it. the note was so sweet from Jasper. i can only imagine...
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
aw, that was so stinking cute and sweet. And he wrote her a note. more aw. No doubt there will be some serious debauch-ing of them later ; )
Sxkitn chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
That was so sweet.. cant wait to see where their realtionship/friendship goes...
Goneforever8888 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I'm excited for this? You Elle WIN!

I love how you had all the kids as friends. Not hate. And those neighborhood nights sound like so much fun!

Bella and Lauren? :O Like the different approach! 3

Jasper younger? Lots of different twists here. :)

EW! Hot dog chunks in his braces? TEAL! :S

Hahaha. Jasper/Rose. I love your non-canon ways

AW! He left her a note? SO ADORABLE.

I can't wait to see where this goes! I'm excited. I liked that you started them off young and that it wasn't a perfect match the moment they met. It was awkward and unknown, loved it.

Great job babe.


~ Jess
atypical-swan chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where this goes. ;)
ElleCC chapter 1 . 6/20/2010

Little Jasper as Little Bella's first kiss is CUTE ) Childhood memories like those—the neighborhood kids, the games, trying to do stuff just out of your parents' line of vision—that's fun stuff to recall.

I'm really looking forward to this, and am pretty excited it's going to be a M/C! THANKS!

:) :) :)
Nicoconsd chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Awwww, Junior High Jasper is just so friggin cute he makes me want to break the law ;)
Legna989 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I love reaping the benefits of Elle's generosity. She's the best.

This is a cute, lovely start to this story, and I'm excited to see where you're going to take it. Lauren scares me a little, though. Ten years old? ;)

Thank you for writing.
CherBella chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
"if I chose dare, she'd surely make me kiss someone like Tyler "hotdog chunks in my braces" Crowley. Eww." Bah ha ha Ew indeed!

Awww that was so sweet of Jasper to write her that note! Adorable. And the whole thing was a perfect description of a first, awkward kiss.

Lucky.In.Kentucky chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I really like it. it brings back lots of memories of being young and awkward. cannot wait to read more!
shelbron chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I thought this was really sweet. The way he sheilded her from the others so she wouldn't be any more uncomfortable was adorable and very chivalrous.
angeljax chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I can't wait for another awesome chapter!
cvds chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Very sweet and cute. Looking forward to more:)
bmango chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Mmmm...young lovin'. First kisses are always something memorable, huh? But usually that awkward kind of memorable. Great chapter, can't wait to see where it goes. -b
christag banner chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
:) Can't wait to read more.
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