Reviews for Just This Once
atypical-swan chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where this goes. ;)
ElleCC chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
YAY! HOW EXCITING )

Little Jasper as Little Bella's first kiss is CUTE ) Childhood memories like those—the neighborhood kids, the games, trying to do stuff just out of your parents' line of vision—that's fun stuff to recall.

I'm really looking forward to this, and am pretty excited it's going to be a M/C! THANKS!

:) :) :)
Nicoconsd chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Awwww, Junior High Jasper is just so friggin cute he makes me want to break the law ;)
Legna989 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I love reaping the benefits of Elle's generosity. She's the best.

This is a cute, lovely start to this story, and I'm excited to see where you're going to take it. Lauren scares me a little, though. Ten years old? ;)

Thank you for writing.
CherBella chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
"if I chose dare, she'd surely make me kiss someone like Tyler "hotdog chunks in my braces" Crowley. Eww." Bah ha ha Ew indeed!

Awww that was so sweet of Jasper to write her that note! Adorable. And the whole thing was a perfect description of a first, awkward kiss.

:)
Lucky.In.Kentucky chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I really like it. it brings back lots of memories of being young and awkward. cannot wait to read more!
shelbron chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I thought this was really sweet. The way he sheilded her from the others so she wouldn't be any more uncomfortable was adorable and very chivalrous.
angeljax chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I can't wait for another awesome chapter!
cvds chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Very sweet and cute. Looking forward to more:)
bmango chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Mmmm...young lovin'. First kisses are always something memorable, huh? But usually that awkward kind of memorable. Great chapter, can't wait to see where it goes. -b
christag banner chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
:) Can't wait to read more.
sweetp-1 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I went to school with a girl called KAtie Marshall so that bit made me laugh. I liked the note, very sweet. Interested to see where this will go. Hugs x
mskathy chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
You know I adore this.

I love the note. The note slays me. I can just tell this is going to be a very sweet Jasper, and I can't wait to read more about them both!
scrosby66 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Awww, what a sweet first kiss! Thanks for writing!
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
So adorable! I love these two as awkward kids! Their preparing for the kiss was beyond cute and Jasper protecting Bella from prying eyes was incredibly sweet. I love this! Can't wait for more!
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