Reviews for Broken Chain
Me chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
When I looked at this, I thought it was too short, but I love the lenght after reading it. It was amazing. And I love how you compared everything to a broken chain. That's amazing! Good job!
Narcissa-Weasly chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Said, but good.
The Rainbow Catcher chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
So good! There aren't any Greasy Sae stories! Interesting
Tour de Force chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
It was very nice. It definitely demonstrates how inter-dependent D12 became because of the rules and poverty.

Good job! ;)
Persephone's flower chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Short, but beautifully written. Who would have thought Greasy Sae would think that? A totally new perspective.

I get the fact that you're trying to base it around a central idea (broken chain) but at times, it gets a little repetitive.

I also wished it would have been a bit more, perhaps?

Nevertheless, Great job! A word of praise to your beta,this is absolutely free of grammatical errors and mistakes.

Kudos: ~Perse.
Kii chapter 1 . 6/19/2010

Okay I loved it. It was so awsome that I can't think of anything else to say

BerryFire chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Nice insight on Greasy Sae, never really thought of stuff in her POV before :)
Silver Tongued Wonder chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Cool insight. I loved it.
lunaperla chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
This is really good. It's great that you pointed out how everyting was like a chain, not a lot of people see that.