|Reviews for Separated|
| MissyChoco chapter 5 . 3/9
Re-reading this awesome fic for the fourth time XD
| Tsukiko K chapter 9 . 2/26
So, it's Max, Patrick, Joshua, Alec, and their sister, in that order? Because the last chapter said Joshua was younger than Alec although I may have misread it.
| Eternal chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
I have become obsessive reading and re-reading this fan-fic, it is absolutely terrific and thanks to the writing I'm crusing hard on Alec :D
Ellis feels like a fully fleshed out character and i feel genuine concern for him even though he's not real. This author is a powerhouse and I hope I can read more and more in the future
| icegirl75love chapter 33 . 9/20/2016
this is the best fucking story i have ever had the chance to read i love it it had sadness it had thrill's and scares i started to cry at some parts and it had every type of love.
| icegirl75love chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/10/2015
Ugh. The sex scene killed the story for me, no offense. All that leading up to it and it seems like you didn't even try to write it good...And you shouldn't bash your own work in your story, it makes me not want to read it because your not confident in your ability.
| Cheshire cat is insane chapter 33 . 2/27/2015
Holy crap i love this story i love you i love the characters you've made Dear god i love you you can count on my support if ya need for now ima go and fangasme everywere
| psychorainbow4455 chapter 4 . 6/29/2014
noooo keelen :'(
| psychorainbow4455 chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
omg love this story
keelan is sooooo cute giggle
i hope alec releans to talk soon though
| Chocolatechip101 chapter 4 . 12/13/2013
KEELAN! *SOBS* WHY!? WHY'D HE HAVE TO DIE!? *SOBS*
| TheBlackCape chapter 2 . 12/10/2013
Why did you tell us the ending!? D;
| USMCcAnthem chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
"I asked nicely." Goodness, that part nearly killed me. This is hilarious, awesome job eh!
| LokiFenrir chapter 33 . 3/17/2013
I gotta say..Great Job! I really enjoy the story and can't wait to read the sequel. (-)
| anon chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
I nearly died of cuteness at keenan bless him :3 maybe ellis will eventually have an infected group to travel with instead of humans. Love this so much
| Cascading Waters chapter 19 . 1/17/2013
OMG! You listen to RED too?! Amazing! LOL
I looooooove everything about your story so far, but I'm hoping for a little more lemon, haha. I want to see a scene between Philo and Joshua, if you know what I mean, hehe.