Reviews for Across the sky in stars
FreeSpirit15 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This was a really beautiful story full of love and emotion. The last few lines really hit the heart, so powerful and full of pure love.
IceVII chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
This is an incredibe story I really liked it, and you wrote the story so well that I could feel the emotion pouring from it. Good Job
TwilightFanSince2009 chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
omg awsum story so sad that its done with
OnlyAugustine chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
please continue! it was awesome! seth and jacob are just so...cute! ur a great writer!

lots of love

Xxwerewolf.loverxX chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Loved it! Cute. Sexy. Sweet. Amazing! Pure amazingness.
PearlissaFanFiction chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Damn , dude , that was awesome -squeals uncontrollably-
Head Mistress Cullen chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
This was really cute
AL25 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Omyygooodd!b so fuking hotttt. It would make me cum three times
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Great. Please continue
hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Nice! D
Mochi no Yume chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
This is absolutely amazing!

You are a MASTER of details!

Everything came together so perfectly and you made the steamy parts REALLY hot!

Seth was soooo cute in this fic!

I feel like you painted him very well

Keep up the good work and EXCELLENT fic!
imaginesex chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Update I love it
startlaughing chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is a really good contribution to the Jake/Seth community :)

Just a little something I thought was important to point out, Jake's like 'but technically oral sex isn't actual sex' should probably be removed. It may not reflect the ideals of some people and could offend others. I know it's just something fictional, but people do take away from what they read, and this just affected me after hearing stories of what that line has done to people, and how it could affect someone reading this.

That line in particular has been know to be the culprit of some pretty nasty damage to some people's lives. It's still a form of intercourse, no matter how you look at it, and can come with it's consequences.

I hope you'll consider that, but otherwise great story! :)
Slytherin Princezz1992 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
oh my gosh this story was so awesome! the ending was very hot!:D
GoinnGaGa chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Ahaha I loved it! It was sooo sexy! Ahaha I Ahaha it really was good! Great job! I really did love it!
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