Reviews for Change |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me you will finish this story, I want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() they really just won't know what is going to hit them. I just hope that the adrenaline doesn't push her too far that Spike can't pull her back. I am glad that she has him in her corner and that he can tell her the truth about how she is acting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEE HEE! The slayer's big bad. So true. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *chants* more more more more! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This! "How was the Motherland Rupes? "Rainy." "Typical." Replied Spike. Made me laugh ~) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I've been dragged into this story well and truly now p~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha giles will kick some ass! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *love* u got a beta yet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh I miss Buffy *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() well I for one am loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens when they come up against the first person of the wet team out to get Buffy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you're still looking for a beta I'd be more than willing, there are a few mistakes I've noticed - words that sound the same but mean different things for one, also, you could do with a "Spike said" "Giles said" Every now and again, as it gets confusing as to who is speaking. Good plot line, good characterization, just a few meddles is all. Let me know if you want me to beta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't Travers die in some random toaster accident? Slip and fall in the shower? Glad that Joyce is still alive; makes Buffy's return way easier for her to deal with. |