Reviews for Make a Wish
nine miles to go chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
this was superbly written and really well crafted. i love that even though she aches for all these material things she ends up taking away some sort of better lesson at the end of each birthday-in particular the one with Artie and the scooter broke my heart. what an idea. i never even considered what happened to all of his things after that, or his connection to other people at that age. the progressions of the birthdays was really well done, too. the sixteenth one was so bittersweet and i love how you showed the clear change in her after the events of that year in comparison to all the other ones. thank you so much for writing this, you really have a gift!