|Reviews for The Ashwinder Incident|
| Hohoe chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
I fell in love with this pairing due to the fanarts of Hinakick(Flayu) and I found your story. It's really cute, soft and fluffy and the characters' personalities suit quite well to my concept of them in the next gen so I enjoyed it. Thank you for the story !
I'll read the sequel in a few days.
| Melissa the kawaii yandere chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
Incest doesn't bother me :D
Louis is my favorite second generation kid and I'm happy that I was able to find yet another story about him X3
Aw, Al was so adorable in this!
| 94yonders chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
oh em! that was prettty hot! and they just kissed and 'inappropriate touching'.
man, you are good at portraying their passion and the forbidden touch of romance excites anyone!
and I like what the puff girl said at the last part. it sounds so ominous, and forshadows much drama and plot. I'm loving it! kudos once again. this is the fic that riled me up to read your other works :)
| Mia Michaelis chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I love your story! Please continue writing more! _
| ShadowFire91 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Found your story, while having a look on Flayus pictures
It was nice to read.
Enjoyed it :)
Well done, go on like this :)
| softnerd chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
"they'd be disowned faster than you can say, C'est la vie."
I freaking love this
| PetrraPan chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
what a beautiful fic. This was wonderful, and a joy to read. I can't wait to see more!
| rhysreads chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I absolutely love this story! I couldn't stop reading it once I'd started, great job! And I mean really, really great job due to my unreasonably high expectations on everything I read xD
but: My Chemical Romance is not an Emo band, it's an alternative rock band so my MCR-crazy friend is out to get you lol
| Start.Again.Angel chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Flayu got me interested in this couple (BEAUTIFIUL ARTWORK!), but this story got me obsessed
| Whisky Whisk chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I read this because I was glancing through Flayu's arts and she recommended this fic. I have to say, you fully converted me into liking this pairing. This story is brilliant, I love it. I'm so glad I read it. Hope to read more from you. :)
| Macro chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Great story ! :D
I'd just like to give you an advice about a French sentence :
When Louis says "vous êtes un ange" He uses a polite pronoun. He should say "Tu es un ange". He talks to his cousin (and younger) so it sounds a bit weird. But well, it may be a choice of yours
| Luv2Read247 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
My first time reading a Lois/Albus fic and now I love themmm~! I wish there were more fics with this paring... I guess that just means you'll have to write some more! 3
| Regn4 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
gosh... I wasn't even a fan of this pair but you and flayu sure makes me mad about this pair and now Im addicted to it!
this is such a very romantic and sweet story X]
| Ms. ShMary chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
It seems Flayu is inspiring so many fics lately! I just doscovered her a bit ago, and have been searching high and low for any LouisxAlbus fics! They're hard to get, no? I gotta admit, I feel sorta weird sometimes about them being cousins. But then I just reassure myself with the "it's not that uncommon in the wizarding world." line haha. I mean, it's not like they'd be able to biologically have a kid anyways. xD
Either way...LOVE IS LOVE :D haha. Great story, definitely a favorite. Hard to find good LWxAP fanfiction. yours was brilliant.
| mjmusiclover chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Very beautifully done :D, never read a albus/Louis fic until I came across flayu ( deviantart )'s lw/asp drawings which are phenomenal like your fic here :D