Reviews for Elijah
ZanTheVampire20 chapter 13 . 11/27/2014
Update please oh please oh please update
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!
MusicOfMyMind chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
Sick of Victor? that must be a crime punishable by death muahahahahahahahah! lol
MusicOfMyMind chapter 6 . 3/3/2013
no way to kill Victor Creed?! SHOCKER! lol
MusicOfMyMind chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Scary, I wonder what he's trying to do hmm...
MusicOfMyMind chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
*shiver* imagining him saying my name would scare the crap out of me, but we all love him the same right? right?! RIGHT!? lol
RosemaryTavington chapter 30 . 1/27/2013
Read your whole story and honestly hope you will finish it one day :-) good luck!
IrishInkWitch92 chapter 30 . 11/11/2012
I miss this story :(
jenefaner chapter 30 . 8/10/2012
Have you gotten a beta for this yet? Its really good, just needs some extra eyes ;)
UKJ chapter 30 . 8/4/2012
I've been reading this in one go. Please continue.

I don't see that much of errors, some misspellings, and som POV, but nothing major. The plot is really good, and you have the right amount angst in it, not to much, not to little.

I like how Elijah goes from scared to sarcastic, to sometimes blow up at Victor. Butsomeone needs to give the guy a lesson about the word . He has mixed it up with fear.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/24/2012
*...*
*re-reads*
*...*
Well...
*reads again*
Hmmm...
*shrugs and gives the cool author-person a thumbs up*
xmen4life chapter 30 . 7/17/2012
thank you for considering to re-write this story. it was really good, but then it got really trashy. looking forward to the new version/new story. please update soon.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/16/2012
i will say if your going to rewrite it im a little upset but its your story! and i will like to read the rewriten one to! i really enjoyed "Elijah".
Guest chapter 30 . 7/14/2012
Personally I never found a thing wrong with the series, I thought it was fantastic. Victor never gets much love around here; always seems to be a certain Telepath and Metal-Bender stealing the spotlight from him. Don't be shy about writing smut, even if it's just really heavy "fluff". I personally know someone who would fangirl right out of her chair if she got to read some Victor Creed smuttiness. But if you feel you must do a rewrite, I cannot fault you. I've done that myself many a time. Just a tip though, keep the original series filed away somewhere so you can always go back for reference. Trust me on this one
ZabuzasGirl chapter 29 . 5/24/2012
Update this please! Gotto know what happens next! Do the x-men show up again soon? Will we see Magneto?
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