Not me being so lucky as to find this fic again 33

Une magnifique histoire bravo

A wonderful and also quite sad story. However sad the characters and their actions ring true to me. I have always wondered about Charles' overly friendly behavior towards Jane especially. It is all to easy to imagine him being just as friendly towards other lovely ladies/angels. Lydia's childish selfishness, Mrs. Bennet's equally childish selfishness and thougtless behavior, Mr. Bennet's laziness and Jane's 'living in a bubble of goodness' is so very canon. It makes the story seem very plausible.

Thanks for posting this awesome story. I read enjoyed reading it.

In what year is this story written, year 1811 or is it modern because you need to look at the language and writing style, example, fun and outgoing isn't 1811 lingo!

Charles should fucking grow up and Darcy should stop babying him

Is the dumb ass writing in the Regency period because it ain't so

You should cut the fucking drama and pity party and write using your grey cells

О,это была очень горячая глава!

Мне нравится их физическое взаимодействие.Это так остро,так чувственно.За эти 3 главы стало ясно,что они оба страстные натуры!

I liked the story of Darcy and Lizzy, but I have to say I prefer the stories that end with a (mostly) happy extended family celebrating 20 or 30 years down the line. This story is just too sad, I can't relate to the Jane as compared to Austen's Jane, and even Mr. and Mrs. Bennet being so evil, him to be jealous of Lizzy falling in love and getting married, and her hating Lizzy to such an extreme, it is all just a bit much. Caroline ending up on a sheep farm requires a little too much to believe on my part, and Lydia although believable, the interconnections were a bit much. I also found it hard to swallow how the other characters could be so idiotic to blame Darcy for everything. Charles dying was also a bit much, he may be an easy going character but I don't think Austen's Bingley was stupid as this one would have to end up in such circumstances. I also didn't like the child abuse by an alcoholic father, the story just lost me after a while.

I am really enjoying this story. Elizabeth's family taken to the extreme of their characters is a revelation, but not a good one.

Sot hot!

This is one of my favorite stories. So nice to see some of the characters in a different light! An imperfect Jane? Oh my I loved it. Finally getting to see her be selfish & - well, human - was awesome! & Charles, wow. That was a shocker but again it was awesome!
Thanks for the great read!

The first chapter would have made a terrific one-shot. Loved it! The rest of the story was very dramatic, parts of which were hard to read because Elizabeth's family flat out didn't like her. Darcy was loyal and wonderful - my favorite character, and your feisty Elizabeth came in as a very close second. She was remarkably restrained towards those who did her wrong, a far better person than me!

Not sure if I already posted a review of this a long time ago so this may or may not be posted.

I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story even with it’s sad ending for some characters. It’s one of the few rare P&P fanfics I got back and re-read every few months. I’ve lost track of how many times I’ve read it, in fact.

I noticed it is the only P&P fanfic you wrote but encourage (ie., beg) you to write more if you are ever so inspired! :)