|Reviews for Breathe|
| emzdix chapter 24 . 5/28
Fab story! Thanks so much. Oh and I just wanted to point out something. I saw someone commented about switching PIC . I can totally see why you did that and think it was a stroke of genius. I also want to point out that, that one negative review nearly put me off reading this fic. Please, if anyone feels the same... reconsider. It’s fantastic.
| Rcik chapter 18 . 4/28
awesome chapter mate!
| Mrs.DL chapter 24 . 4/20
I enjoyed the story. Thank you.
| nymphastral chapter 24 . 2/17
This is the best P&P fanfiction I’ve ever read... I always come back to this story. Thank you for sharing this with us.
| Leslie E chapter 24 . 1/27
This has been an absolutely fantastic story! Great job!
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/20
It's sometimes difficult to find well written fanfiction, but this was great. Thanks for sharing your entertaining story
| Midnight May chapter 24 . 1/8
All was very nice up until we reached the point where Bingley re-entered and made a whole lot of mess in the process. Your Jane is human and of course she'll make mistakes but I found that her ending is so very cruel. Mr. Bingley's demise is very... i don't know how to describe it. I just feel that he should be alive and suffer the consequences of his actions. Him jut dying is too kind. And him just dying is too cruel for Jane.
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| Guest chapter 17 . 10/24/2017
I would have them all killed...
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/24/2017
Oh MRS B IS GONNA FREAK OUT
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/24/2017
On I read..
| Kartos chapter 24 . 10/3/2017
Why does it change from narration to first person? That was very jarring.
| Petite Mule chapter 24 . 9/16/2017
Thank you for a very beautîful story.
| Jenny chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
This story was just amazing to read !