Reviews for Breathe
kir-girl24 chapter 19 . 11/5/2015
You write great. I admire your imagination and I respect your opinion on the movie or characters.
I don't believe the characters are quite as you interpreted, particularly Mr. Bennet, Charles Bingley and Jane.
But like I said, you write well and this is your own opinion.
NaniiLovegood chapter 24 . 10/28/2015
I am in love. In love with your writing style, the story, the way you ended everything. I just... I'm in awe at your writing gift. I have just finished devouring this beautiful piece of art and have no doubt that I'm about to check out all of your fics.
Thanks a lot for writing!
Janeite chapter 24 . 10/25/2015
You should publish this. It's a lot better than the fanfiction already on the Amazon site Maybe clean up the grammar and get rid of words that are inappropriate for the era. Also try to condense the multiple point of View epilogues into one epilogue written in the third person much less confusing. After all that's what Jane did and her epilogue
Sarah chapter 23 . 10/23/2015
I truly and honestly thank you for all that hard work, it was a wonderful story I thoroughly enjoyed. Kind of sad that the Bennetts had to get what they deserved, but I'm glad Lizzy finally spoke her mind! And I loved Darcy and Lizzy together, it was amazing!
The dark lord's wife chapter 16 . 10/11/2015
dorothybert chapter 24 . 10/9/2015
Yikes. You do loathe the Bennetts. Thanks for this entertaining tale.
dorothybert chapter 2 . 10/8/2015
Great to be inside this head.
geoavenger chapter 24 . 10/3/2015
Great story!
Kimmie2445 chapter 20 . 10/1/2015
So heartbreaking.
Kimmie2445 chapter 17 . 9/30/2015
I do hope the Bennets see the error of their ways. Thank you for all your hard work!
Kimmie2445 chapter 14 . 9/30/2015
I love how they are with each other. Loved it! Thank you!
Kimmie2445 chapter 13 . 9/30/2015
So sweet! Loved it! Thank you!
Kimmie2445 chapter 12 . 9/30/2015
Finally! Lizzy was able to speak her mind. Loved it! Thank you!
Kimmie2445 chapter 11 . 9/30/2015
WOW! So much hurt.
Kimmie2445 chapter 9 . 9/30/2015
WOW! Sad to say, but looks like they are getting what they deserve. Thank you for all your hard work!
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