Reviews for Breathe
Levenez chapter 24 . 8/26/2020
Thank you very much for sharing this story with us. I have only read it nowmany years after it was written. I like your premises and your comment in one of the early chapters that you have pushed each character to an extreme of their personalities was good to have.
It is a beautiful story of two people finding each other despite everything, sticking to one another while Elisabeth’s family is being torn apart. Some later part of the story is somewhat sad but in line with your premises. Not everyone will have a HEA and some characters clearly should have grown up and become an adult!
I enjoyed your story very much because of its premises and the fact that it is different to many P&P FF.
ElizaG1 chapter 24 . 5/9/2020
Very interesting and unique take on the Bennet family. Enjoyed reading this!
ElysiansDream chapter 4 . 3/30/2020
I would have liked more dialogue over the narratives
ElysianaDream chapter 1 . 3/30/2020
Love the prose. The passion and turmoil reads very real.
Wyndwhyspyr chapter 18 . 3/14/2020
So swoonworthy
Guest chapter 24 . 3/10/2020
Love this story! They're so besotted with one another! I think this is the third time i've read it. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
Wyndwhyspyr chapter 9 . 2/20/2020
Poor Lizzy
Wyndwhyspyr chapter 1 . 2/20/2020
Omg what a beginning ️
Wyndwhyspyr chapter 24 . 2/20/2020
Oh what a wonderful story! I hope you write and share many more
mencia chapter 24 . 2/9/2020
I have just reread your novel, and I still love it. Keep on writing ! Please!
Stephyyyy01 chapter 24 . 2/6/2020
I really hoped Lizzy could have fixed things with Mr. Bennet or Jane could have a happy ending
Stephyyyy01 chapter 20 . 2/6/2020
poor Bennets
Stephyyyy01 chapter 19 . 2/6/2020
Damm...
Stephyyyy01 chapter 17 . 2/6/2020
bravo Lizzy!
Stephyyyy01 chapter 8 . 2/6/2020
HAHAHAHAH The last part xddddd
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