Poor Elizabeth, the Bennets are TERRIBLE parents!

Nice chapter.

Great chapter.

Great story.

This is my second time reading your story. I loved it so much. I read some reviews and it seems most people loved it. In particular, I liked Lizzy's response to her family. Her wedding day made me cry. I know the purpose of your story was not to deal with Kitty and Mary but would have liked more interaction with them. Mary and Charlotte are sort of my favorites, after Elizabeth and Darcy. I never thought that Jane and Charles went together. While Jane is always portrayed as this very sweet, nice, forgiving, blissfully ignorant woman and Charles is the male equivalent, I doubt their marriage would be a happy one. I like the occasional bad Jane and always love a crazy Caroline. I hope you think about writing more FF in the future. Thank you for posting your lovely story.

I really must give you my compliments for this excellently written letter. I could practically feel the insult behind Janes "kind" words. It is truly masterfully written

Ya i always though... charles and jane weren't really right for each other, tbh.

This nerves indeed!

Engaging read. Interesting to push the secondary characters flaws to the extreme and let that play out. Outside of the Pemberley bubble, it's all a bit tragic and hopeless. Thanks for writing.

after a certain point i was sad to se a total 180 in the style of writing, then scanned and skipped to see if it was a one-chapter occurrence... NOPE it wasn't. sad. was this story adopted, and finished by someone else?

SO INTENSE! ! !

And then your phrase, "... Or Charles' sister." I laughed SO hard.
It was a masterful little nugget of humor!

Very enjoyable to see Lizzy's enemies fall one by one.

Poor Caroline

Charles is very colourless

Getting away from the Bennets is a definite perk of getting married