Intriguing start

Thank you. I'm really enjoying your story.

Hey there, I don't know if you know but Charles' situation is actually is more serious than you realise and wouldn't happen the way you've written it.

Firstly, he CAN walk unescorted with Emily since they're not engaged as long as it it is in a public place and they have been introduced. Secondly, she'd be terrified of being compromised until he declared himself because at the end of the day he could leave town and be fine and she'd be ruined. Literally ruined.

Thirdly, and most importantly, his engagement to Jane is legally binding. In those days, the father and husband to be would sign marriage articles which constitute a legally binding promise. If he broke that in any way, he would be sued for breach of promise. It's far more than keeping his gentlemanly word- it's a HUGE legal problem.

Finally, calling people out was illegal in regency England so her father wouldn't be so open about it, and also he had no cause based on the fact that all they did was take walks in public places (in full view of the road) and talk and laugh. Additionally, if he had a family, he'd never risk it by calling out a young and fit man- it would leave them destitute. Additionally, calling someone out was essentially an admission that the woman in question was ruined- usually only happened in the case of seduction OR breaking an existing engagement.

Story has some good ideas but you need to do a LOT more research. Also, you should have someone with Regency lingo experience read this because a lot of the language is very modern.

I really enjoyed your story, you create dense atmosphere and quite good dialogues as well. I hope you will write some more pride and prejudice variations. You are a talented writer.

I love how this letter is unfriendly in a really subtil manner. you don't see it on the first glance but if you know the background it's quite obvious

You're so incredible! Thank you so much for keeping the story to after the wedding! You're the BEST!
I LOVED IT!

I LOVE AUNT GARDINER SO SO MUCH! I always see as her Penelope Winton and my heart hurts. I see myself So precious! I loved this chapter Amazing work! Well done! And I'm very glad that this is not the end. I really want to read more. Thank you, thank you!

I cried. This was WONDERFUL! This story is amazing with a narrative very real and smart. Great writing, my luv! I LOVED EVERYTHING SO MUCH

I'm totally lost in it I LOVED EVERYTHING! Especially your narrative, showing Elizabeth and Darcy's point of view. Seriously, what an amazing plot! Well done!
Thank you so much for sharing this!

I trully believe this would happen... Make a lot of sense to me. Great chapter as usual Loving It!

LOL! This finale! I loved it! You're the BEST!
This chapter is pure joy to me inspite of all I hate Caroline's awful behaviour. Great work!

I trully believe this would happen... Make a lot of sense to me. Great chapter as usual Loving It!

I'm totally lost in it I LOVED EVERYTHING! Especially your narrative, showing Elizabeth and Darcy's point of view. Seriously, what an amazing plot! Well done!
Thank you so much for sharing this!

LOL! This finale! I loved it! You're the BEST!
This chapter is pure joy to me inspite of all I hate Caroline's awful behaviour. Great work!

My pure and truly God! I just started reading and now I know that I need to read everything!