Reviews for Breathe
Mirder Mystery chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
This is a beautiful piece! You kept them in character so very well. :)
Loli-pop0394 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
WOW! Very romantic, I love that scene from the movie. Going to my Favorites.
The Wilting Rose chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Loved it :) Very nice. I hope you continue. Only one thing seemed wrong to me, and that was the case of the rating. I thought it seemed a little too mature for young children. But other than that I look forward to seeing it grow. Well done.
Charlotte chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Aww... I don't know if I have the words for how great this is... It's really good and so hot! Great job...

"What Am I supposed to Say when I'm all choked up and your ok/ I'm falling to pieces yeah/ I'm falling to pieces"
NC chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Really very good, just a quick nitpick at the end. 'The good stuff' isn't exactly Regency lingo...a different choice of words may be in order.
austinlover chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
lovely, just lovely. Might we expect another chapter?
darrah chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
You should continue this story. I like your style. And I think you have beautifully captured their voices. Please continue!
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