| Reviews for Breathe |
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   Loli-pop0394 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 WOW! Very romantic, I love that scene from the movie. Going to my Favorites. |
| The Wilting Rose chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 Loved it :) Very nice. I hope you continue. Only one thing seemed wrong to me, and that was the case of the rating. I thought it seemed a little too mature for young children. But other than that I look forward to seeing it grow. Well done. |
| Charlotte chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 Aww... I don't know if I have the words for how great this is... It's really good and so hot! Great job... "What Am I supposed to Say when I'm all choked up and your ok/ I'm falling to pieces yeah/ I'm falling to pieces" |
| NC chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 Really very good, just a quick nitpick at the end. 'The good stuff' isn't exactly Regency lingo...a different choice of words may be in order. |
| austinlover chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 lovely, just lovely. Might we expect another chapter? |
| darrah chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 You should continue this story. I like your style. And I think you have beautifully captured their voices. Please continue! |