|Reviews for In the Arms of Defeat|
| jen87 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I enjoyed this piece very much. Suggestions to repair breaks in the flow:
"...and I wish that this time you wouldn't have GIVEN in..."
"Pride does NO longer exist, if it ever did...I NO longer smile and I wonder who was, in the end, the one to be broken."
"We both LIE in the arms of defeat, hating each other –what we've become-...