Reviews for You Went That Far Away
moonshadow2012 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
that was was so beautiful.

ktag, master of the shadows
ZukoPlusKatara4ever chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
...Wow..that's the only word I can think of...or maybe powerful.

I'm crying-no bawling! This story was AMAZING I wanted tragedy and you have the best one (for this paring) on the whole site! That's all I can think to say, except; thanks for this wonderful story :') Now, if you'll excuse me I have to go cry in a corner...
The Love Doc chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Awwwwwwwwwww! Poor Sari! )': Wait. What happened to Bumblbee? TTOTT Nooooo! You must make another chapter! Please?
tiedwithribbons chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
*SOB* *SOB* Now I'm depressed. Very sad story.

By the way, sorry to bother you like this, but you disabled your private messages, so this is the only way I could write to you.

Anyway, if you need help with your stories, I know of 2 characters you can use: Lickety-Split and Lightbright.

In case you're wondering, they're not OCs. They just don't show up in the character list because they only appear very briefly at the end of Endgame. Lickety-Split's the orangey-brown one who looks a little like a teddy bear, and Lightbright's the blue one. They're Autobot femmes.

According to the Allspark Almanac Volume 2 (please excuse my assuming that you've already read it), Lickety-Split is a waitress at Maccadam's but someday wants to quit and win a Golden Disk in the Tour de Orgenon. Her hero and idol is the seven time Galactic Olympics winner Lightyear and she hopes to someday beat his record and/or get bonded with him. No mention of her alt-mode, though. Lightbright is a search and rescue bot who transforms into a dual-purpose hovercraft/submersible. She draws her name from the powerful light emitters that aid her in scouring low lit areas for Autobots in need and lost items of importance. I think they're supposed to be best friends.

Again, sorry for disturbing you, and sorry for assuming you've read the Allspark Almanac Volume 2.
Glass lady chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
...this is so saaad...and yet sweet, and yet still SAD! Gah...

I think you succeeded in capturing the feel of the song. Absolutely fantastic job.
ElasticPoodle chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Oh... oh gosh...

Heatrbreak in 3...2...1...

D
Sounddrive chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
(;_;) Bumblebee, NO! Why did you have to die? Hey, did Sari die or something, cause it sure looks like it.
Fastern chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Like I said on dA, this has an appealing childlike perspective. It's REALLY sad, to put it in one sentence, and I love how you left the ending uncertain. Will Sari be lost in space forever? Will the pod crash? Will Bumblebee's ghost suddenly appear out of no where and rescue her just when we think she's about to die? (a la Prowl and Optimus in the series finale.) Its the kind of ending that's satisfying, even if it doesn't reveal all the secrets in the story, itself. Kudos to you, Lee-Chan. This was an excellent story, and, I believe, one of your best to date.
LucasVN chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
That ending is sad...

...but wonderfully written.

Did she die in space?