I realize you wrote this some time ago but I just wanted to say BRAVO! you wove a complex story w lots of steaminess an delivered it eloquently and directly. I love it. thank you for writing.

I am so loving this story! You have done an amazing job! .

Awww this was such a good story! I always gotta have Edward in my ff but never tried with Edward/Emmet and i gotta say i'm so glad i gave it a chance! Lovely! Thanks so much for sharing this. Hugs from Argentina

This is awesome. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for a fantastic story :) The world needs more good Emmet/Edward fic!

Just finished reading this wonderful story! So sad to see it end. I loved, loved, loved Edward and Emmett, but the supporting cast of characters were equally great, particularly Rose and Rebecca. The smut was delicious, but the story was compelling too - thank you for sharing your creativity!

Oh what an amazing story! This has been on my 'to read' list for so long. I LOVED your characters; especially Emmett. Such a beautiful love story and a beautiful ending after all they went through. Thank you so much. This is definitely now a favorite of mine!

Ann Marie xx

Hm. It bothers me that the real issue with Jas and Alice wasn't discussed in this chapter - the groping- simple because of Edward's past judgements. He may have been a little harsh before, but this incident I think would have been an appropriate display of his anger/fristration/concern.

Anywho, I did like that Edward realized he wasn't really being fair to Em.

OMG what an awesome story, i couldnt stop reading it. great job

This was a wonderful story, I didn't want it to end! :)

Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed the pairing and the way you wrote both the characters :)

OMG! NO!

Emmett is the best and he better tell Edward soon. Ugh. This is SO going to blow up in his face, I can see it coming already... :(

OMG! I absolutely lived this story. The writing, the characterization, the drama, the cute/sexy moments between Edward and Emmett. Please, please tell me you're going to continue the story as that it isn't over. I just read all 22 chapters straight through starting late yesterday evening. I read all the way through all night and today. You're writing and this story really resounds in me. Please keep it going. You have an amazing gift and talent. Thank you for writing this amazing story! :)

Great story Thank-you

OMG! Seriously two sittings and I was done. Such a great story that made me fairly useless today at work. Thank you! I loved this! I want more! 3

I'm so loving the start on this! I just recently stepped into reading E/Em, after being pretty much only reading E/J. Can't wait to read more