|Reviews for The Poorly Built Sandcastle|
| Shandrial chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Wow, that was pretty awesome. So melancholy and sad, though, I suppose it's supposed to be. You can really feel Orphen's distaste for love, hehe and that really fits the character. Well written and movie, thanks for sharing. Though no mention of Majic POV to see what he think. Think there will ever be more written?