Reviews for Stealing Cinderella
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
okay who says they dont want to far and then grabs someones ass
d-kronk chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
Lovely ending! I really enjoyed this fic. I love Derek's nervousness as he waited for Penelope and her wanting to look perfect for him. And I really like them not being able to make it into the house. Wonderful work, I'm looking forward to reading more.
d-kronk chapter 6 . 5/25/2013
I really like the honesty between them in this. I'm glad that Kevin has just recently started talking to Penelope that way and that she isn't going to have to hear it anymore. I love how giddy the two of them are, it's great.
d-kronk chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
Yay! I'm so glad that he finally got her to believe what he was saying and her reaction is great. I really like her suddenly realizing that she's going to hurt Kevin and Derek's reply is great. I really like how happy they are and their phone call is great.
d-kronk chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
Man... here comes the angst, which is alright a little angst in fics is good. I like Penelope voicing her thoughts to him and questioning all of the past days when he didn't want her. And I love Derek telling her that just because he didn't say anything out loud didn't mean that he didn't want her. And I'm glad he argued his point and told her that he realized she may not choose him but that he did what he did for her and that he would be there for her.
d-kronk chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
Another great chapter. I like Derek taking Penelope's body language as a reason to continue. And I love him speaking being what puts Penelope in action and her realization that Derek had planned everything and her taking what he was doing wrong. I'm so glad he was able to explain himself and love him telling Penelope that he will wait for her, hopefully he won't have to wait long.
d-kronk chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Now that is the way to get to her. I love when Penelope finally gets why he is saying what he's saying and her knowing he over heard Kevin. And I really like that Derek tells her he isn't going to do anything to get in trouble and his great restraint in keeping that promise but definitely pushing her buttons. And boy did he push. That was great and I'm looking forward to seeing if Penelope does stop him.
d-kronk chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Great start! I love Derek's anger with Kevin in this and it just escalating until he does something about it. And I love what he's doing. The conversation with her was great and I'm looking forward to Penelope's reaction to Derek's confession.
iluvtorun chapter 7 . 1/19/2013
Great story!
CeeCee333 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Well frikkin writen
DudeYouJustTotallyStoleMyCar chapter 7 . 8/20/2012
OH MY GOD I BLOODY LOVED THIS! I am being completely serious when I say that this is my favourite Morgan/Garcia fic. And there are some really really good ones. In fact my old favourite was Home for the holidays! You are a bloody genius! I love you! (in a non-creepy way obvs.)
banygirl03 chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
Excuse me for a moment I think I need to take a cold shower before I read anymore!
chavelaprincess chapter 7 . 7/30/2010
*unf* There are no words. OMG.
RPM Shadow chapter 7 . 7/6/2010
Love it! Soo much!
Leigh59 chapter 7 . 6/27/2010
Perfect ending to your story. Cinderella was always his they just needed the ball to go to.
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