Reviews for Erised
NiniNeko chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
... 'Were is the sequel?' thinks nini. Then all the sudden. "SEQUAL! SEQUAL! WHERE ARE YOU?! SEQUAL?!" ten hours later. "s-eee quuu al"
RenesmeVivio chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
That was sad and adorable
Tobee chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
Aquarica chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Sooooooo cute!
gvargas132 chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
I loved this story!
shadowfox18 chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
I know this was meant to be a one shot, but I could see this being made into a multi-chapter story.
Fanfic Lover chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
This is an amazing fic, only downside is that hes not at the top of his class. Good job!
crazybread chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Okay, I'll admit it; I enjoyed this so much more than I thought I would.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
love love it love it if only it was 45 more chapters longer
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
I commend you on your summary. Best. Ever!
maipigen chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
i want moooore hehhe great job
Trying -Helps chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
That was an interesting story, gave me a look at what could have been. You might consider making this a full on story. It has promise and the writing was done good. In any event keep up the good work.
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skdc8595 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Is it just me or you really added some things that weren't there before? Anyways, nice fanfic. I really like stories like this, you know family stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
owww,, i'm crying
secondstardust chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This is beautifully written, but bittersweet to read. That said, I really enjoyed Minato's narration; it was a nice balance of the sort of humor I would expect with this family and serious moments. Truly loved the scene at the training ground, it was by far my favorite. The story ended in a good spot as well. The title is a reference to the Mirror of Erised, isn't it? Well done :)
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