Think you could do some more single stories just on Fiona, maybe a bit of her background, her family? This is great!

THis was great. And yes fi does rock.

-Ember:)

great story

Interesting. I hope you continue!

Oh, I wish you'd continue with this! Complete? No! We want more chapters! Great story!

I really liked this character study. Loved the paragraph about their fighting...really nicely done!

Hmm an interesting look into what could be going on in Fiona's mind. Honestly, I can't say I really considered the trauma Fiona's kidnapping may have caused her.. as absurd as that may sound. They didn't really acknowledge any effect it had on her in the show.. this kind of makes me wish they would have. It definitely adds some depth to Fiona's characterization, very interesting :)

I'm glad that someone's acknowledging what happened to Fi. I know that they did a little but it seems like it's been glossed over on the show. I'm also intrigued as to exactly what happened to make Fi bite him that hard...