Reviews for Mind
tinylexie chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I loved this. I also felt that Darken Rahl was affected by Jennsen’s kindness towards him in “Fever.” Darken Rahl isn’t used to kindness or friendship, so of course he wouldn’t know how to handle it and of course he would turn back to wanting ultimate power. Darken Rahl doesn’t believe that he can have love, so he will seek to have ultimate power instead.
adamsfamily chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I check on almost daily to see if there are any new or updated Darken Rahl-centered stories as there are far too few out there. I was so happy to see that you had put this up. I really liked this. In the TV episode, you could never tell exactly what DR was thinking when Jennsen kissed him and put her hand on his arm, but his reactions always hinted at some vulnerability. You really emphasize Rahl's complete emotional isolation from everyone around him and how he is quite aware of it. He misses emotional connections, but at the end, for him, the chase and winning is still the "best feeling of all". So Darken Rahl and so sad. Good work.
PristinelyUngifted chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I love this!

It's great how you explained his feelings while keeping him in character!