|Reviews for Objection|
| TheLadyJaye chapter 167 . 12/18/2013
That was a lovely story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
His patronus I a doe! Not a stag! And the spell is 'expecto patronum'... Not off to a good start. These little errors really set me off... I'll continue on... Hopefully these errors will be. Corrected in future chapters.
| Gracie chapter 167 . 11/9/2013
I finished it all! It was very long, but I didn't find the need to skim over boring parts because there weren't any. :D I stand by my earlier review where I said that Ron and Harry actually misused Hermione. She said that Severus was the only person she'd ever slept with sober. That makes me hate Ron even more and helps explain why it took so long before he decided she needed his 'help.' In his selfishness, HE ruined HER life. Why didn't the Weasleys step up and help instead of 'laughing at her' when she got wasted at their parties? Was Ron really so perfect in their eyes that they didn't think to talk to him about how he was destroying her? Didn't they feel the need to help her instead of just judging her? A lot of people dropped the ball here and just made her the scapegoat because she was an easy target. She was the only one not allowed to screw up for some reason. Anyway, this wad a really interesting and fun story!
| Gracie chapter 84 . 11/8/2013
Okay, it sounds like Ron actually caused all of Hermione's problems. He's the one who got her addicted when she was vulnerable, enabled her addiction to keep her 'fun,' and played with her emotions instead of fixing the problems he created. I suspect, based on what's been revealed so far, that he was an alcoholic as well. He kept up with her drinking for the most part, didn't he? And the raging sounds like alcoholics, at least in my experience. Harry is despicable in this story. He must have known about her problem since Ron was complaining about it, but he took advantage anyway, even though he was in a relationship. Did he even have the excuse of being drunk out of his mind? Did he act like a man and step up to support Hermione? No, he threw her under the bus and made her miserable until she lost the baby. He slept with his best friend's girl the same night they kinda-sorta-broke-up-whatever while she was too drunk to remember much less consent WHILE he already had a girlfriend he was hassling over an innocent (at the time) work relationship. Hermione was obviously wrong too, but Ron put the drink in her hand and fed her addiction while Harry took advantage of her. They're not her victims, and everyone needs to stop acting like they are. On to the next chapter, and excellent work! My eyeballs are dried out from reading most of this in one sitting, but totally worth it. :D
| silverose29 chapter 167 . 6/4/2013
wow whatan amazing story i loved iti was enthralled from the begining
| jazercise chapter 167 . 4/13/2013
Amazing! This was like Law and Order and absolutely perfect!
| Guest chapter 137 . 3/28/2013
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| Arime Setta chapter 167 . 3/25/2013
Wonderful job! Very enjoyable!
| Aisha04 chapter 167 . 3/5/2013
| Mother of Tears chapter 167 . 3/2/2013
I just found this story and had to keep on reading until it was done. I LOVED it!
| 126.96.36.199.nolongerinuse188.8.131.52 chapter 167 . 8/12/2012
I've never really been a big fan of really long multi chaptered fics because I sometimes find the storyline grinds to a halt and becomes boring but this, this I absolutely loved ;)
I was almost disappointed after reading another chapter because I was getting closer to the end.
The storyline was one of the best and wonderfully written that I've ever read on fanfiction.
Definitely a top favourite :)
| Montara chapter 167 . 6/18/2012
Great story! Thank you!
| cooemi10 chapter 167 . 5/27/2012
It was a very interesting read :)
| sleepybluocean chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Hi, just wanted to know why snape would have stag, a potter pass it down from father to son patronus,was it itentional or did you mean doe instead? Btw your H.a.L. is very interesting, hope to read all your writtings.
| Khyharah chapter 167 . 4/27/2012
Another amazing story! Though I was a little frustrated at the pace before the trial, I enjoyed the story on the whole. And your creativity w/Hermione's life was superb! Great job!