Reviews for Race You through the Shadows
Spark of the forgotten chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
This was Great! I just wish you wrote more Sonic the Hedgehog storys. O well.
TheFreelancerSeal chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
It's a well-worded story, for starters. You took your time to make sure you picked the right words, and I'd say it shows. I enjoyed your choice of words, and Shadow is quite the character to explore. I think it shows what's going on inside his head during Sonic Heroes, and you capture it well. The only time I didn't think you used the right word was the very last one. Somehow, a word like 'preparedness' doesn't seem to fit in entirely with the rest of the story, although that could just be my opinion. Even so, it's a very well-done one-shot and I'm very particular about them. What can I say, with a chaptered story, you can take time to flesh things out; with a one-shot you have to make it all count, and I'd say you have. Well done.
Lucy Labrador chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Very detailed and very interesting...