Reviews for One side to another
your mommy chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
take this croap off the site it has nothing to do with the little princess your writing is terrible your mother should be ashamed
SilveringBlue chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Hello Sun-Moon-Stars-PEACE,

I would like to inform you that your story violates the rules of . accepts fanfiction only, not original fiction or poetry. Your story must have something to do with A Little Princess to be posted in this section.

Please remove and, if wished, repost to a site that accepts such works, such as Fictionpress, Deviantart, or Livejournal.

Thank you,

SilveringBlue of Critics United
Simple Fics chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I'm really not sure what this has to do with A Little Princess, but I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and assume Sara's telling this story to someone, since it is the type of story she'd tell.

However, you really need to break this into smaller paragraphs, because as it is, it's pretty much impossible to read.