|Reviews for The Eternity Effect|
| woodland59 chapter 23 . 12/22/2013
How is it that I hate Gelphie with a burning passion yet i still manage to absolutely love this story?
| nursejoy7 chapter 23 . 7/21/2013
awesome! really good one! 8.8 will you make a 3th one? plz say yes plzzzzzzzz
| zelene2004 chapter 23 . 2/15/2013
So totally brilliant that I finished it in just a few hours!
| Guest chapter 23 . 10/5/2012
I mean I never read a story like this one and I think I will read more from you. Really, that story just made my day!
| guest7 chapter 23 . 10/5/2012
So entetaining and sweet, that I couldn't stop reading! Even if I wanted to!
I know I may sound desperate, but: PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE write more gelphie! 0.0
| Petroleum Jelly chapter 23 . 9/27/2012
I love your portrayal of all the characters, and the interactions between them are very well-written too. And Lurline, oh Lurline...she's become one of my favorites because of your story! Do continue sharing your excellent works with us.
| kelly chapter 4 . 9/6/2012
I really like your stories. have you tried pairing yero and elphie?
| Hello my name is Alice chapter 23 . 7/17/2012
awesome like the first part :)
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/10/2012
... This and Not All Quite Together Here have to be the two best stories I have ever read on this site. No seriously. Your writing kept me up until 3'o'clock in the morning, hours after I told myself that I would stop. I just couldn't. Elphaba and Glinda developed and changed so much from the first time Glinda saw the "Green Thing" in her room back at Shiz. I just loved how you developed their relationship and how you believably depicted how devoted they are to each other; but neither of them thinks that they are good enough for the other (Then of course they try to convince each other.) And Fieyro... I have to admit that Glinda's view of him more than slightly influenced my view of him as well. But, he's moved on with Pfanssee, so I'm happy for him. Also, I loved what you did with her character, seven years can change a person a great deal, and boy did she ever. Anyway. I love these stories and hopefully I will be reading more from you.
| piceaabies chapter 23 . 5/28/2012
Another good story. I thought you had a great mix of humor, drama, and adventure. I liked the differing POVs. You did a good job with Elphaba and I still love Glinda's POV. It made a nice contrast between the chapters. The scenes between Glinda and Lurline were hilarious they made me laugh so hard.
| kairitheseventhprincessofheart chapter 23 . 2/21/2012
This was quite enjoyable! You resolved or hinted at resolutions for all of the loose threads in the first story. I really liked it, and the gelphie relationship was so sweet and perfect. Thanks for writing this!
| musicalvampirelove chapter 23 . 11/20/2011
So I finally finished reading the last of your stories and I can tell it's just such great I don't even have a word for it! I love the way you make me feel with Glinda and Elphaba and I love the way you describe everything and in fact i just LOVE the way you write. Even if I actually don't like reading English stories because looking up the words sometimes gets so frustrating... But I don't care in this case.
Please please please I beg you for writing another installment of this story... Oh, wait, I think you alredy started uploading them to another webside, I just have to look it up! But what about an installment for "Verdigris"?
Hope my English is understandable
| DarkndAngel9 chapter 23 . 9/14/2011
So I may be bouncing in my seat here. This ending was perfect! I can't. Ok so I love Lurline. She's hilarious and her and Glinda just going at it. Oh my God. I was laughing so hard! She's crowning Rora and then *tackle*. Oh my God. Imagine seeing that though! She's supposed to be their God and there she is in that ridiculous dress wrestling with Glinda. LMAO. And then even when the scene is heartbreaking and she's trying to comfort Fiyero Elphaba thinks "Which is not much given the house she is wearing" and i'm laughing again. Especially when all of Oz just wanted to see Glinda and basically shoved her aside. So yeah I love Lurline. She's the best!
Also I love how the family interact with each other. "Momsie! Glinda! Elphaba!" I can't believe them. I'm so glad Elphie has a real family now! That scene cracked me up and now that I think of it reminds me of Rocky Horror. And then how "nightly activities" turned into "loud sex", 'insatiable' into 'willing'. I love their banter! And now Nessa is here and Elphie is going to meet her mother. Everything is going good! This could be a good ending for the series, but I definitely see some potential for the third part. So hopefully one day you'll find your drive again! :D
Also this line "She's so awful! I absolutely despise her! I am going to wring her neck and set her on fire!" had me cracking up. Well that whole part had me cracking up! I mentioned I loved Lurline, right? The best. She's simply the best. And also! (ack sorry for such a discombobulated review, but I'm just truly happy with this story!) That man that man! He's the Unnamed God isn't he! He has to be! Look at him just going around thinking he's all clever. Surely Lurline knows! If not, imagine her reaction! This gon be good.
Also also! I feel so unbelievably slow for not catching that her father (the Wizard) was dead and her father (Flex) was alive. I kept thinking how it was a trap and that wasn't really her father, but another soul sucked into his body, but then the Wizard shows up at their doorstep and I'm like OOOH! Duh! How could I forget! Alright so let me end it here. I just absolutely love this series. I'm looking forward to more from you! :D
| mountains from molehills chapter 23 . 4/8/2011
So, I just want you to know, you've completely and utterly ruined me for practically every other Wicked fic on this site :). It's terribly unfortunate, most particularly since I've only just discovered the joys of Wicked fanfic! And now practically everything I read is a veritable chore to get through after I've had hours literally melt away as I consume chapter after chapter of your work without rest.
So, just in case it's not completely and blindingly obvious by now, I should let you know that I adore your stories :). I'm absolutely blown away by your gripping plots, rock solid characterisation, true-to-life dialogue and the utterly gut-wrenching, heart-breaking, spirit-lifting emotion that infuses each and every paragraph you write. You make your readers live and breathe your characters, their thoughts, their feelings and their actions.
It's hard to pin-point anything in particular to bring up. I loved it all ... Well, nearly all of it.
I must admit, I do wish Fiyero had been punished a little more for his actions with Elphaba. Of course, I have no issue with him asking Elphaba to clarify her feelings for him. This was entirely acceptable, and indeed, I feel that Elphaba shares some fault here. I'm hoping the sequel will include a little bit of her coming to terms with exactly why she was so reluctant to properly nip his feelings in the bud from the outset (not to mention that whole jealousy shtick she had going on). But kissing her? Honestly, what kind of lowlife makes a move on a girl who is *obviously* committed to another? More-over, a girl who is *obviously* committed to someone he *says* he considers a friend? Seriously, Glinda let him off *way* too lightly.
Otherwise, though, your stories just hit all the right notes for me. I love your portrayals of Glinda and Elphaba. Their "voices" just ring so true to my ears. And I *really* love that you actually *do* something with Glinda. So many other authors seem to use her solely as the bubbly, whiney, damsel-in-distress.
It's part of what makes reading other fics such a chore for me. Other authors write Glindas that get kidnapped and dragged around by their assailants for several days, and not once do they even resist, let alone attempt an escape. They just sit around, whimpering and whining and waiting for their Elphabas to come rescue them. Honestly! It's so tiresome.
I love that you actually let Glinda grow, acquire skills, kick some arse for herself, and overall be useful to Elphaba for something more than just a roll in the hay.
And I love the way you're showing Elphaba's growth as well. The difference between Elphaba at the beginning of "Not Completely, Altogether Here" and Elphaba at the end of "The Eternity Effect" is just astounding, and yet the progression from one to the other has been so perfectly natural and believable that it's hard to isolate exactly where and how the changes have occurred.
So, thank you so much for sharing your stories with us. I (and, I'm sure, countless other absolutely enthralled readers) wait and hope (with ill-managed impatience) to read more from you, *particularly* in this series, but I'm sure anything Wicked-wise will do :).
Thank you again, and the very best of wishes ...
| xxpinkgoesgoodwithgreenxx chapter 23 . 4/6/2011
so i was up all night reading this story, love it more than sliced bread. you are amazing! when you write the next one though, i have a request. please write a sex scene where glinda and elphie make love in a tub of banana pudding. it would be even better if elphie is pregnant, and especially wonderful if spanking is involved.
oh yes, and please have zombies. lots and lots of zombies.
omg gelphie!1 update soon!111