Reviews for When Will You See Me?
VAVikingGirl chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
"I cant see anything but her."

"You haven't tried, Jacob. You haven't tried to see anything else. You let her control you. She not bad, Jake…she's just not right for you." he whimpered, "When are you going to see me?"

What a sad, sweet, agonizing question. This was a great story- very hot, very sweet and just wonderful.

I really like your writing. I'll be reading it all.
JtheChosen1 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Simply amazing!
Hannah chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I love this story!
Alt3etf chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Ugh i think i just came!
nice chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
HOOTTT
hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Loved it! D
bludgerno1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
aw! i loved it!D
Mochi no Yume chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
It's a mixture of hotness and beauty...particularly that first paragraph...it just sets the scene PERFECTLY!

Of course the sex was hot and I felt like I was watching two people make love right in front of me!

What an absolutely fantastic fic!

Keep up the AMAZING work!
MyCookiess chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
MADAME ! MORE CHAPTERS!
Emmett-lover4ever chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
That was...well amazing(: haha(:
Dyinglight-15 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
wow i have never read anythind like that. wow i really like your story keep on writing ;)
kinney-69 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I loved these two together:)

That was just beautiful and so HOT!

Really good.
michaelhen13 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
omg that was CRAZY HOT! it made me come ;)
Daddy's Little Pyro chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Aww this was sweet :)
Bittersweet Dream chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
That was Beautiful and HOT! OMG, I love this. Just love this. Wonderful Job. IT would be interesting to see how bella and everyone else reacts to this.
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