Reviews for The Massage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn...*blushes scarlett* That was appreciated. |
![]() ![]() For the love of god...STOP USING SO MANY ELLIPSES... It's...ridiculous...reading your text is...nearly...impossible... |
![]() ![]() First: your stories are great and thank you so much for sharing them with us all. Your style however, is sometimes a little weird, making it hard to read your sentences (and you definitely have way to many ellipses). Maybe it's what you're aiming for and if so, just continue, and never mind me. Someone else already mentioned it but maybe you could get a beta? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I needed a break from angst and this makes me happy. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Such a sweet evening chatting with each other. |
![]() ![]() Sometimes I think way too Slytherin. I am a Raven/dor most of the time. But this, enjoying time with the Headmistress in her office, in the highest tower of the most prestigious institution in Scotland? Oh yeah. |
![]() ![]() I really like this one. That Minerva can trust Hermione that it is okay for her to sleep there. That Minerva initiated what would make her late. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize this story is quite old at this point, but I'm wondering if you would let someone beta it for you? The someone being me. There are odd word choices that you use in a way that is the exact opposite of the meaning of the word, for example, recanted. It means that one no longer holds an opinion or belief, especially one considered heretical. That is not the way you are attempting to use the word. The story is good, it just needs a little help that I would love to give. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved all of this. Thank you so much for sharing. It's beautiful and so hot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh, I'm in love with this! A friend recommended and I'm so glad she did! |
![]() ![]() Nice job on this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD nice way to end it but Slytherin is creepy deepy XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOOHHH IM DYING! XD I didnt actually think that you could Transfigure your womanly parts into a mans though.. thats a bit.. eh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit.. Ginnys reaction was beyond perfect wth why is this so good |