|Reviews for The Alternate Ending|
| PrincessNyx15 chapter 3 . 9/20/2014
No offence, but ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Annabeth with Malcolm? Just noooooooooooo.
| MossiStone chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
Really interesting, i love it
| Rachel E Dare chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
HOLY SHEEP FLEECE! HOW DID BLACK HAIR AND GREEN EYES COME FROM TWO BLONDS WITH GRAY EYES! And isn't malcom like her step brother?
| Epic.Hermits.United chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
OMFG Percy CANNOT Die D:
Im addicted :P
| Sneaky ninja 05 chapter 5 . 9/27/2010
it was a good story
| riptide2010 chapter 5 . 9/1/2010
i liked the fic it was an interesting idea i love the whole percy reborn into annabeths kid idea but... malcolm is a son of athena their half siblings thats really...weird for them to be married anyways i liked that percy dreamt of his past life
| Emily Ebriection chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
K, this is really great, but once they mentioned that it would be gross for Annabeth to date another child of Athena. It would baisically be incest.
| Mystical Pen chapter 4 . 7/11/2010
this was...WOW! at first, i thought it would be sad 'cause he died. but i don't know... it felt like it was the right ending. i know it's weird but while i was reading it, i just felt like i was the one feeling the sadness of the characters. especially percy. the way he stared at his hands and saw that they were transluscent and he was dead. the feeling of your memories being taken away from you. it's weird! and it's sad! but it's GREAT! great job! :))
| kookookarli chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
this was really good! I love how you have the epilougue and the side stories, I also love the whole twist with him being reborn as Annabeth's son
| Xx-Fax to the Max-xX chapter 5 . 6/24/2010
That was pretty good, but I felt as if it were lacking something the entire time. I dunno. Thanks for the story, keep writing.
Xx-Fax to the Max-xX
| StarofCalamity chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
This was amazing
Please could you do like a mini sequel
Where Luke-Perceus realises that he was once Percy Jackson; which would be cool
Your a talented writer :)
| DragoNik chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
gr8 alt ending! congratz!
| fandomLife chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
That was a really sweet ending. Even though it kinda weird that annabeth is with Malcom. Since he is a so of Athena.
| I-luv-Aang-Percy-Danny chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
i think percy went and got reborn...then turned into annabeth's baby!
idk...the baby description reminded me of percy...am i right?