|Reviews for Tales of the Battle|
| Terrance Endsley chapter 15 . 12/11/2010
I love it. BEST ONE YET!
| FlittingGemini chapter 15 . 12/10/2010
LMFAO! Almost every Weasley got to smash Malfoy! Thats classic! My favorite was definitley Ginny. ;)
Alas it only makes it sadder that Fred died. :(
When i saw that this was updated I was like "SQUEE!" I've had 3 of my faves updated today 8D
| Perchance A Primrose chapter 3 . 12/10/2010
I have to give you kudos for writing Luna. She's probably the most difficult character to write because of the thin line between too childlike and not childlike enough. I think that you balance on that line quite well.
I also like the little hints of DeanLuna :)
| Perchance A Primrose chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
This is a really cool idea. I was just browsing the new list of HP stories and decided to give this a try. I'm trying to decide who all died in the Battle of Hogwarts for a Next-Gen story that I'm writing and this might help but you don't care about any of that. :)
THis is really good. I love your characterization of Madame Pofrey and Madame Pince.
| sbmcneil chapter 15 . 12/10/2010
Great chapter! I loved all of the trials Draco had to go through. I've always wondered how the rest of the Weasleys found out about Fred - very well done :)
| sliz225 chapter 15 . 12/10/2010
Ha! I was a little confused as to where this was going, until Charlie finally pointed out just how many Weasleys had smacked Draco. Funny, sad, and true.
| wheresthewolf chapter 13 . 12/7/2010
I love this story, I found it on Mugglenet but I decide to look for it on cause im mostly here and here it is yay! I love these short stories of different point of view. Keep it up.
| FlittingGemini chapter 14 . 12/4/2010
Great chapter! I wonder myself what happened to Lavender, I tried to look it up, but I just ran into dead ends!
| Vintage'Classic chapter 10 . 12/3/2010
I absolutely LOVE this chapter- it's well written, it's well thought-out- LOVE IT!
| FriendofMolly chapter 14 . 12/3/2010
Wow! Another really good chapter. I felt I was there. You have a unique way of getting into each persons head and giving us a view unlike any other. Thanks.
| charm chapter 13 . 12/1/2010
This is a great story like all your others. I was looking forward to seeing the battle in Colin's perspective. How do you get updates when you post new chapters, if this is unfinished?
| anniepFF chapter 2 . 10/12/2010
I'm currently reading "Hunters and Prey" and was confused when I read that Rabastan Lestrange topped the list because I thought that Augusta Longbottom had killed him. At first I was feeling sorry for Harry and company, that due to Augusta's secret they didn't know what had happened to Rabastan. After reading several H&P chapters, this point really bothered me so I went back to Augusta's letter. I think the brothers' names got a bit mixed up here, based on these 4 quotes from her explanation:
"Her blasts drove Cleverley's killer from his hiding place and I saw him run into the forest. I recognised him immediately, it was Rodolphus Lestrange."
"I had the opportunity to remove Rabastan Lestrange from the path of the Acromantula, but I did not."
"... you would have saved Rabastan Lestrange..."
"His body was found and identified after the battle and now only his brother Rodolphus remains at large."
I believe that Augusta killed Rodolphus and Rabastan is being hunted by the aurors.
Thank you for these two fantastic stories-and I'll be leaving you a review for H&P soon.
| anniepFF chapter 13 . 10/5/2010
What an amazing series of vignettes! I love how you varied the situations and voices. My favorites were of Luna and Oliver, but all were enjoyable and touching. Do you know that this isn't in your "storyverse" list? It ought to be for those, like me, who decide to read their way through your version of the HP universe.
| sliz225 chapter 13 . 10/3/2010
I hated how little JKR gave us about the final battle, so i'm glad somebody's filling in the gaps! This is a very sweet, very honest story, that's totally in canon and in character. I'm adding you to my updates list, because this story is really going somewhere.
| NinnyTreetops chapter 13 . 9/29/2010
I love this series. I've been waiting for someone to write something like it for ages, and you're doing a great job.
Cannot wait to read more