|Reviews for Tales of the Battle|
| erm31323 chapter 25 . 6/14/2013
This is a wonderful collection, I enjoyed every one of these. I really like how they interwove with each other and information we got in one story came back or was expanded on in another. Very, very well done!
| erm31323 chapter 21 . 6/14/2013
I love Neville, I always have. This was a great chapter, seeing things from his point of view. I liked the subtle jealousy between him and Justin as well.
| erm31323 chapter 14 . 6/14/2013
This one was great! Seems a fitting sequence of events for Draco.
| erm31323 chapter 3 . 6/13/2013
This a perfect characterization of Luna and the way that she thinks. I also like how you start each chapter with small hints about who each character is and let the reader try and figure it out first. I am really enjoying this so far.
| rskanumuri chapter 20 . 5/5/2013
Buck Beak's was my favorite by far!
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
What a delight!
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/17/2013
I want to cry too.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
LOL. Love this chapter. Very Luna
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| keeptheotherone chapter 25 . 3/5/2013
I loved your characterization of Irma, her obvious love of order, her pride in creating sense out of chaos, and especially her broad and rather obscure vocabulary :) You made me like her even though you kept the disagreeable parts of her character.
I thoroughly enjoyed this entire story; you did a wonderful job with characterization, plot, and continuity :D
| keeptheotherone chapter 24 . 3/5/2013
I really like this in-depth looks at other perspectives of the battle, especially the Auror/law enforcement details you created for this one. The jumble of the abbreviations and acronyms on the forms might just be my favorite part! Wondering if Rebecca's hate stemmed from her absence of magic or his possession of it, the ease of finding her for a Muggle-born Auror, the nightmares blurring Tina's body with his daughter's, even the female employees coming to the Auror office to see Harry, are all great, realistic details.
| keeptheotherone chapter 23 . 3/5/2013
All this time, and it's Narcissa who is the master Slytherin. Brilliant.
| keeptheotherone chapter 22 . 3/5/2013
Millicent is scary! I wouldn't cross her. Another great perspective.
| keeptheotherone chapter 21 . 3/5/2013
You're really reminding me of my parents here. My mother (and supposedly, her mother) say "it's always darkest just before dawn," and my dad, who served in the Army Reserves, used to say, "lead, follow, or get out of the way" whenever I dallied about something. I loved the tiny hint of Neville/Ginny. "I've been giving orders for a year, but Ginny was not very good at following them. She would always question orders, unless they were from Harry"-that made me laugh :D I love when Luna's Ravenclaw-ness shows up, like with the Homenum Revelio spell. Seeing Hannah, Ginny's apology, killing the snake... This might be my favorite chapter so far :)