Reviews for Multiplicity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, just got to the end of this, and it was fun! Tofu's BS "advice" to Ranma seemed oddly preachy and monologuey, feeling a bit like a justification-monologue from Skysaber, and was skimmed through. Likewise, Kasumi's whiplash-reactions to pre-emptively conform to whatever Ranma felt at the time also felt injustifiably false to her. The rest of it was intriguing, and while still OOC, proved to be very VERY entertainingly done. "Happosai" and Pantyhose Taro/Manny Tower going back and forth with names was my second fave bit of the entire thing (fave being the whole Multiplicity thing itself and the resulting epilogue). Also feel the need to mention that I LOVED the whole "demon-sword drove the Kunos all NUTS and now they're better" thing! Seeing the Kunos redeemed/cured is always a good read, imo! TLDR: While some things hit sour notes to me, the overall experience was very enjoyable, TYSM for putting forth the time and effort to write and post this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Two weeks later Ranma had mastered every martial arts technique he had ever seen, or even heard of" essentially made me drop the fic. You are trivializing everyone's achievements in the art by letting Ranma inexplicably master them in hours and then improve upon them. |
![]() ![]() When did Voldemort show up? :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() He could become a stuntman/actor, a movie producer would save a ton on special effects with Ranma there :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was different |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I've just found the golden example of the "average" fanfic. It's not really good, but neither is it all that bad. There are a lot of ideas and concepts I found interesting, and just as many that I found silly or just plain stupid. The execution was, on the whole, mediocre; not particularly well written, but no egregious errors either. All in all, a perfectly average piece of fan fiction. I... I don't know what to say. Kudos? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very amusing story to say the least. Nice to read though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story. What happened to the cursed sword? Could it somehow return? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is a really good fic. :) I really like fics like this where the characters take resources that were already available and utilize them to the fullest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What does "..." mean? I tried googling it, but couldn't find anything. For that matter I've seen "?" before. I'm sure they mean some sort of sound or expression, but I'm not sure exactly what. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, now you've got me all curious. I want to know why Wanda showed up. Also, I enjoy the way Ranma is unashamedly pursuing all of the girls, even Nabiki and Kasumi. |
![]() ![]() I think the unexpected voice was Kami-sama & he/she (depending on who you ask) spoke just before Ranma entered the room |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another incredible and interesting story good job! |
![]() ![]() Stopped reading here when ranma instantly agreed to teach ryoga his new stupidly over-powered techniques. I would explain my reasons why but it should be obvious to anyone with half a brain why that scenario is just plain stupid. |
![]() ![]() Fix your formatting, it's a joke. |