|Reviews for The Lunatic's Point of View|
| Nanashi chapter 1 . 5/11/2002
That ended a bit abruptly, but good characterisation on prot's part, I think.
| LissaLapin chapter 1 . 2/21/2002
Great wonderful fantastic terrific fic!
| NateSean chapter 1 . 2/20/2002
Again, I really do enjoy your work. But there is one teensy, little, minor question I have, just for the record:
1. In any of the books does prot actually refer to Gene as, "Gene geno narr Brewer"? (I've read K-Pax, I know he doesn't do it in that one, but I haven't read the second one yet.)
If so, I think you may be overusing it slightly. A lot of fanfic writers tend to mess around with the "catch phrases" of certain characters, and thus the reader gets bored and moves on. For example, if I were to write a Michael Crichton fanfiction and I constantly referred to Ian Malcom's annoying references to CHAOS theory each time, readers might think I didn't understand the character very well. We all know that CHAOS theory isn't Malcom's only trait...he also has a habit of getting kicked into the hospital by dinosaurs...hehe.
Does that make any sense? Otherwise it's a great piece.