Reviews for Arabella Serene Volturi
Guest chapter 5 . 8/15
please write more
Guest chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
Are you going to do anymore?I think you should.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/27/2014
I hope for more i love it
Skyeward MusicLover chapter 5 . 7/31/2013
Lve the chapter. cant wait to read more
Anime Girl Kim chapter 5 . 3/30/2013
I want the next chapter!
Emily chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
I can't see WHY you take sooooo long to write a short chapter!
Sorry, I'm just DYINg to read the next chapter, really, I will rather die than not know what the next chapter will be!
Here's some new tips: Write about arabella and Edward argue about ara's real identity, Alice tries to stop them.
Caius, Marcus and aro try to stop them, it becomes a fight. Jane tries to stop Alec from shouting his head off, arabella see's Alec in pain trying to stop them, ara stops the fight, collapse to the floor, and start to weep.
Like it? It's your story anyway, just trying to help you speed up!
Emily chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
Its me again!
I just wanted to give you tips for your story, you can first write arabella returning back to the throne room, then Edward and Alice asking her questions about her identity, finally write about what happens to Alec.
Will he die, or somebody with a really strong power heal him. Will Edward and alice leave with arabella's real identity, or will they be killed. Will arabella's uncles and father punish her?
Please write quickly, can't wait!
Emily chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
I just love it! The way you describe Alec's pain and state, lovely!
Please write more, please!
KanameTwilight chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
who's POV was the last two?
Dark.x.Raven.x chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
plzzz add more!
god of all chapter 5 . 10/3/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Anonymous.Peace chapter 2 . 8/30/2011
Aweh, Cna you find it in your heart, To update it 2011? For mwoi? Please? Or did someone adopt it?
M chapter 5 . 4/11/2011
I love this story so good! You like nedd to write more! Please!
LibbyLue24 chapter 5 . 3/22/2011
Love your story. Can you please update soon? I would love you forever
ixdookiie chapter 5 . 2/26/2011
so...r u gonna update anytime soon?
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