|Reviews for Less than 400|
| Jelfia Maleak chapter 5 . 9/26/2010
these where excellent. good job. and more please!
| Secret Agent Pointless chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
Well done! These are pretty good. I am looking forwards to seeing your later chapters. Maybe you should try your hand at writing a full length story, as I reckon you would do really well. Keep up the good work.