Reviews for The Start
RiddleMeInsane chapter 24 . 5/25/2012
lovely story! terribly sad though, it made me cry but also kinda made me realise that all good things come to an end so you should treasure them while you've got them... This story is amazing. Keep writing!:)
luv2beloved chapter 25 . 12/19/2010
I very much so enjoyed this story and surprised that you are thinking/planning a sequel. I will love to know what and how you plan on doing that. I thought for sure when he saw Ness for the last time that she was an angel that would be able to walk among them. On an assignment per say. Please don't hold us in suspense. I would love to see Jake stop phasing and grow old with his children. You made Ness and the kids so much more human than any other fics so I can see the kids not being immortal unless they have the wolf gene. I would love to have maybe a hint of an idea of where you are planning this. Please...! I do not see Jake moving on by no means. And from little tidbits that I have read on fan sites about imprinting it is said that when the imprint dies the wolf slowly dies as well. Keep us updated!
XxLydzxX chapter 25 . 12/19/2010
Awwwwwwwwwww im glad she came back 2 jake 4 a bit tht was cute :) but very gud! i loved it nd well done!
luv2beloved chapter 24 . 12/19/2010
Cried my eyes out
acdc00420 chapter 21 . 12/10/2010
ya im not even tripping on the fact that shes immortal and has cancer i just think its kinda dumb lol its like a twilight lifetime movie crossover good writing as far as that goes but im not gonna lie aint looked at this story in forever and im disappointed
XxLydzxX chapter 23 . 11/24/2010
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww its shit she died but its still a great story! :D keep going nd i neally cried aswell! hehehe aswell wen sarah started crying so sad :'( anyways keep going! nd ignore the ppl who leave h8r comments their just dumb! lol c yah l8r xxxxx
luv2beloved chapter 23 . 11/24/2010
Wow. Cried my. Eyes out. I can't see Jake going on. Maybe some miracle will happen
jess1984 chapter 23 . 11/24/2010
very sad story but very good! cant wait for more
Remember the Blood-red Leaves chapter 23 . 11/23/2010
WOW! i'm so sad that you had to kill off Nessie! I almost cried reading this chapter. It was definitely the way you had to go though, it just would not have been right if you tried to keep Nessie alive and undergoing chemo, she had to die. Thank you for following the story the way it had to go instead of trying to change it. I know that sounds a little odd since the story was all in your head, waiting for you to write it anyway, but that's the way it seems. You started the story, and now it is taking it's own direction, a direction you have to follow. I really love your story, and I just wanted to say thanks so much for writing it, I can't wait to read more!
emma1658 chapter 22 . 11/20/2010
Cancer?seriously?come on! she can't get cancer, it's not only that it is NOT possible, it completely ruins the vampires\wolves story!
RiddleMeInsane chapter 22 . 11/17/2010
Ive read alot of fanfictions and alot of them were go0d. They were just go0d but this 1 is the best of all. Thank you for writing such a great story,il be sad if it has ended. I love this fanfic and all of the songs in it. Ive fallen inlove with the songs 'if i die young','when i lo0k at you' and 'im already there'. I have 1 thing to say bwt u...YOU ARE AWESOME!
Remember the Blood-red Leaves chapter 22 . 11/15/2010
wow. this chapter is amazing, but so sad, but also so true. i almost started crying when i read it. You definitely have a great story. please please please don't let Nessie die unless you have to follow the storyline that way.
jess1984 chapter 22 . 11/15/2010
sooo good.. but sooo sad.. cant wait for more
XxLydzxX chapter 22 . 11/15/2010
awwwwwwwwwwwww thts soooo sad :( i hope she gets better! hopefully she'll b alright nd they can liv 2gether :D cnt wait until the next chapter ;) ahaha xxxxxxx
luv2beloved chapter 22 . 11/15/2010
I am guessing that is where she dies...Very good emotional chapter. You had me in tears. I pray that she doesn't die but either way the story has been great
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