Reviews for Heaven
FuzzyRedFezz chapter 12 . 8/7
Ha! I like the way you wrote Teddy was wondering what on earth was making everyone cry. This is definitely one of my favourite fanfics.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/16
I liked but needs more chapters
Cassiopeia Black-Lupin chapter 9 . 4/13
This story is really cute and fluffy and I LOVE the movie White chicks
SweetandWritten chapter 5 . 3/6
I am an actual author. But i can't login right now. I like your story. I write to and not everyone reviews but I support you. Good Luck
Guest chapter 9 . 12/31/2015
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2015
Don't feel like a bad writer cuz of reviews. Look at the likes and stuff
Guest chapter 9 . 8/9/2015
Happy birthday
ethz106 chapter 21 . 6/28/2015
This is a really great story! It kept me really engaged, and I couldn't stop reading! But, near the start of this chapter (21) you put Fred, when I think you meant George. Remember to proof read!
Guest chapter 15 . 9/27/2014
I love it
Guest chapter 10 . 8/8/2014
Guest chapter 7 . 8/8/2014
loved the ending
teagandenny chapter 9 . 4/11/2014
Teddy remus potter-lupin
I think that way he can use potter for muggle school to stop any confusion
yolo chapter 12 . 10/10/2013
Too weird. Very icky and too loved up and all of that crap. I do not like this. Have it more twenty first centry like saying yolo or twerk and taking the piss. Canney alright tho. od luck in future little rose potter xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
4 chapter 22 . 8/22/2013
Change it to m and add more detailed. Sex scenes
Felixia Sacredz chapter 22 . 7/7/2013
"Harry! Harry, come here quickly!" Harry heard Ginny's squeal.
"Yeah, love?" Harry asked, coming over to Ginny.
"Look!" she cried, opening his hogwarts letter. Harry read it aloud.
"Dear Mr. Potter,
In this year for you, it will be a little different. You are going to be helping one of the seventh year students, since you are eighteen. You will be like a teacher to them. Also, for head boy, you were elected, with Ms. Granger as head girl. Hope you have a fun year.
Minerva McGonagall," Harry read.
"You were elected head boy!" Ginny squealed, hugging Harry fiercly.
"I am definantley helping you, Ginny," smiled Harry. Ginny just smiled and gave Harry a long kiss on the lips. Harry returned it by pressing his lips against hers harder. After a long while, they broke it for air.
"Harry!" came Hermione's squeal. Harry gave Hermione a big hug.
"I'm glad you were elected head boy, Harry, not some random jerk I'll have to sleep with," grinned Hermione.
"Yeah, me too. I'll just have to sleep with you, not some other random girl." He gave Ginny a kiss on the lips and then went to find Ron.
"Hey mate," he said miserably.
"Huh? Ron, what's wrong?" Harry asked him. Ron took a deep breath.
"I shouldn't be angry," he said.
"For you being head boy with Mione. I really wanted to sleep with her in the same room," breathed Ron
"Don't worry, mate, you can still date her and stuff. SHe knows you like her and she likes you too," said Harry, trying to comfort him.
"Yeah, you're right," said ROn. Harry clapped him in the back and went out of his room. After two weeks, everyone was getting ready to go to Hogwarts.
"I'll drive," Ron volunteered.
"Oh Ron," said Hermione sympathly.
"RON!" she screamed.
"Hermione?" ROn said. Hermione grabbed him and kissed his lips for a long time. She ended it with a hard kiss.
"Ron, I love you. You are just so important to me," whispered Hermione in his ear.
"I love you too, Mione," said Ron with a confused face. When they got to the train station, the Hogwarts train stood tall and proud in front of them. Just as Harry was about to get on the train, a girl, brown haired, asked him if he would help her.
"Sorry," he said to her, "I'm helping someone else." The girl pleaded with him.
"NO!" he finally yelled. The girl looked hurt and walked away.
"What was that yelling?" Ginny asked Harry.
"A girl asked me if I could help her," said Harry, "But I'm helping you." Ginny smiled and kissed Harry's lips.
"So," Ginny said to Ron," Who are you going to help?"
"You, my only sister," replied ROn.
"Ron, I'm sorry. Harry's helping me," replied Ginny.
"Oh, then maybe...I don't know, whoever askes me," said Ron.
"Guess what?" Hermione came back from the bathroom.
"I have someone to help," she replied, grinning.
"Who?" Ron asked.
"A seventh year named Michael Defere. He's so cute!" Hermione giggled. Ron looked disappointed, and Hermione seemed to notice it.
"Don't worry, Ron. You'll always be mine. He's never going to be more than a friend of mine," smiled Hermione. Harry laughed at Ron's expression. Ginny stifled a laugh. Ron looked better.
"Well," said Hermione, taking the seat next to Ron," Who are you going to help?"
"I don't know, a girl who askes me," said Ron.
"You?" Hermione turned to Harry.
"Ginny," replied Harry. Hermione smiled.
"Ron!" said a voice, familiar. A girl came out of the shadows.
"Wanna help me?"
"Ok," Ron replied. It was Callie Green, a seventh year girl who has been trying to steal him from Hermione.
"Ron!" Hermione cried. Callie smiled smugly at Hermione and skipped off.
"Mione, honestly. Do you think Callie would steal me from you?"
"Well, no, only if you truly love me," replied Hermione.
"Hermione, I'll always love you, no matter what," said Ron. Hermione smiled and kissed his lips.
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