Reviews for Battle
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
I was looking through haiku... This is by far, the most beautiful, emotional haiku I have ever read...
You have true talent
Meikura chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
This was an awesome haiku, so few words yet so powerful
Zukibun chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
its so beautiful
Elaborated-Run-Ons-and-Riffs chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Very good - captures an important part as well as theme in the movie
dustydragonslayer chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
You've captured both the emotion and the scene in just those few words. Really nice.
slytherinsal chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
catches the sentiment of haiku, and is very evocative.

though to be picky i don't see a season reference; also the middle line is 6 syllables not 7

On the other hand it made me cry which kinda says that it made the point without worrying about strict rules
Prolix5 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
WOW, this is the first Haiku I read.

Just beautiful!

On to your next story now :D
Kerttu chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I think I completely love you.
vanillafluffy chapter 1 . 6/21/2010