Reviews for Once Upon a Vampire Pt1 & Pt 2
IzzieRose16 chapter 8 . 7/12
Bjorn
JxB Vamp chapter 23 . 5/9
Isn't Isabella a vampire so why would Jasper need to feed in order for him to continue so he wouldn't hurt her? And why do they have sex every 5 minutes! I mean jeez vampires are not that sexually deprived since they have mates.
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 24 . 3/28
Awesome story, so far! Love it!
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/31
Keep up this awesome work loving this
tinkermist99 chapter 24 . 1/20
update. jasper isnt proving to her that he loves her
TinaF chapter 23 . 11/2/2015
Wow an amazing story!
Stelle's Pen chapter 24 . 5/11/2015
This is one of the best written mate stories I've come across but it's such a surprise to see that it was completed as it's been marked.
tiffanythibedeau chapter 24 . 4/8/2015
Love the story
tcwilli29 chapter 24 . 4/5/2015
why post as complete when it's clearly not? loved the story but irked it ended like it did. You're a great writer and i hope to read more from you.
Freoborn1980 chapter 24 . 3/1/2015
Feeling a little ripped here thought this was a completed story as it's been listed as complete wondering if you have finished the story and maybe could share where it can be read
silversimon chapter 24 . 11/28/2014
So are you making it more sexy or less sexy? Home will we be able the novel. Version? Thanks.
sargeant chapter 24 . 11/19/2014
I like the story would love to read more
twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
I was reading this over on TWCS. I thought it was complete but it is not. I am so very sad. I was truly enjoying reading your story. I am dying to know how Jasper and Bella made it. I loved all your POV's and the different mating traditions. I wish you would finish it. I just wanted you to know that you are a really good writer.
Imani Whitlock chapter 11 . 10/17/2014
The fuck he think this is. ...
Imani Whitlock chapter 2 . 10/17/2014
Holly freaking shit I would have,I don't even know just wow nice job.
515 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »